How To Critique A Story

Lunavia Luminari is someone who has spent the most of her life inside, reading and painting her inner thoughts. What she wants is to read her favorite romance book, bask in the sun and paint. But her peaceful life is destroyed when her family suddenly goes bankrupt and her Fiancee broke up with her and got together with her cousin. With the responsibility to help her family get back to her feet, she had no other option but to set herself up with the most dangerous man in the country who is 10 years older than her. It was at that time her life seems to have a new start, with a child that came suddenly and a husband, Luna has to protect herself, help her family rise to the top again and get rid of this marriage. But without realizing it, she already set herself up for a lifetime contract. Will she successfully get her desires without losing herself in the process? How would she cope with the new life that is placed in front of her? With a child between them, will she finally accept him as part of her life?

Kairylinne Calista Sarmiento is an only child of the well-known business tycoon, Mr. Frederick Sarmiento. However, due to an unexpected twist of life, their businesses become hanging by a thread. In order to have its progress back, their only option was to marry their daughter to a mysterious billionaire, named Ezekiel Nickolas Fabros. When the two met, they got along so well. They even had a deal, which is to not catch any feelings with one another. However, since they have to live on the same roof and see each other everyday, both seem to break their deal. In the end, they've developed feelings for each other. However, what will happen if Kairylinne will know about Ezekiel's secrets, would she run away or choose to stay and take her revenge?

Hazel loses so much in such little time. Betrayed, abandoned and lost, she accidentally summons a demon. Although the idea of selling her soul seems absurd at the beginning, several attempts to end her life make her realize just how much she needs his protection. All in good time, a signature is all it takes for him to aid her in her new found quest for revenge.

STOP! This is a Second Book! Please make sure you’ve read the first book, A Vampire’s Kiss Goodnight. This is also Boy Love. Silas Rosario, once shunned brother and long time embarrassment of the Rosario bloodline has stepped into the position of vampire King.He has decided to follow in the ideals his brother once inhabited. The only question remaining is will he be able to handle the pressure? Or will he relapse into his old ways and corrupt the system? This is the love story between Silas Rosario and Rei Suoh.

She owed her life to her wedding with the man of her dreams and would do anything at all to make sure she gets married to him, but what happens when her lover, Finn King goes missing on a day to her wedding. Is it all a plan to break Miss charming's heart or there is more that meets the eyes? Discover the suspense in this beautiful story filled with love, lust, betrayal and murder as Anna McLain goes on a journey of finding out what really happened a day to her wedding.

(First Generation 5) Pilit na ipinakasal ng kanyang mga magulang si Terrence Mikael Saavedra kay Corazon Villaluna kahit pa may iba na siyang mahal kaya naman ipinangako niya sa sarili na gagawin ang lahat para magdusa sa piling niya ang asawa. Bata pa lang si Corazon ay gusto na niya ang binatang si Terrence kaya nang mabigyan siya ng pagkakataong maikasal silang dalawa, hindi na niya ito pinakawalan pa. Subalit sa kanilang pagsasama imbes na magiging masaya siya ay puro pait at hinagpis lamang ang kanyang nararanasan sa piling ng kanyang asawa. Darating kaya ang araw na matututunan siyang mahalin ng asawa o susuko nalang siya? Paano kung muling magbalik ang babaeng mahal ni Terrence sa buhay nila? Handa ba niyang ipaglaban ang kanyang karapatan bilang legal na Mrs.Corazon Saavedra?

During a class reunion, a few well-to-do classmates instantly recognize that my branded bag is fake. "How is that possible?" I cry. "This is a new release that my husband got me. Don't you guys know him? He's Tom Smith, Zora Group's CEO." I hand my classmates business cards. The company is one that Tom set up using my name. Naturally, I'm the major stockholder. My classmates look at the business cards doubtfully. One says, "I've never heard of this company." When I get home, I have someone check on Zora Group for me. However, the news I receive is that the company has never existed, much less have a stockholder like me. Tom has another company under his name, but I'm not the stockholder. I drive to the DMV and find out that the car isn't in my name. The company and car are under Tom's name, but someone else owns them with him—his true love, Lauren Rowse.

Aemon Cooper was facing a huge problem of finding a bride to marry in order to keep the power and the rank he has in the Mafia world. There was Lily David who was mourning after the death of his father and now, she was being controlled by her family. After Aemon met her at the funeral, he knew his problem was solved as he had already found his bride. Lily had no choice but to marry him. But, what would they do if they soon find out that the death of Lily's father was all because of Aemon Cooper—the man she married. How would she run away after being tied to a Mafia Boss?

Financial reporter Zoey, known for her pride and icy beauty, and with a formidable business acumen, finds herself at the center of a scandal on the very day she and financial tycoon Barlen are to get their marriage license. An insider exposes her, claiming that she loves only Barlen's wealth and that their marriage is merely a product of her exquisite acting skills. Unaware of the brewing storm, Zoey and Barlen are in the midst of obtaining their license when the news breaks. Barlen, upon reading the revelations, 'borrows' Zoey's phone and promptly turns it off, facing the onslaught of public opinion with firm evidence in hand. Surrounded by media reporters, Barlen is bombarded with questions about his perspective on the scandal. He deliberately twists the narrative: "My wife, she doesn't just love my money. Could she possibly love someone else's?" The reporters press on, clarifying their query: "Do you mean she only loves money, not you as a person?" Barlen remains composed: "She loves my money, and I love her as a person. Is there a problem with that?" In a single sentence: He redeems her with all his love and warmth. How could I not be enamored with someone like you?

" Don't stop!I want to hear you moan for me,scream whatever dirty words come to your mind, that's what I married you for, you are now my slut, your work is to pleasure me and watch me ruin your innocence." ===== Clara Davis was tricked into marrying the son of their business rival, just to honor their patriarch's promise, but on the wedding day a stranger appeared with the picture of a dead person. He forced her into marrying him, with the aim of making her his tool to get revenge on her family. But why will such a wealthy stranger choose to spend the rest of his life with a mentally ill woman? ,How did her family offend such a monster?. Unfortunately for her,she got answers to this question in the most cruel ways she could ever think of. She helplessly watched as he heartlessly stole her innocence and stripped her of every right to dream of a better future. ===== When she thought she has finally melt his frozen heart and couldn't wait to break the news of her pregnancy to him. He returned home one day with his first love. The lady everyone thought was dead suddenly showed up in the arms of her husband , to make matters worse, she was also carrying his child.