Sinful Addiction
"I bet no one's ever fucked you right, so you decided to punish us all with this."
My stomach twisted painfully. This was the third story in a row that had been ripped apart in the comments section. I was supposed to be an erotic web novelist, building a career on steamy, addictive stories that made readers touch themselves in the dark. But no matter how hard I tried, my sex scenes always felt flat, and painfully fake. Readers could tell. They always could.
I slammed my laptop shut, buried my face in my hands, and cried for a solid twenty minutes. I had poured my heart into that chapter, with hours of writing, rewriting, trying to make the characters’ lust feel real. And for what? More cruel