Absolutely — I’ll keep the same first-person voice, emotional tension, and relationships between Brees, Keegan, and Baylen, while expanding the scene to 600–1000 words without changing the direction of the story.I scrambled to get to him before Baylen’s words could fully sink in.“Keegan, wait!”“Brees, you know something about my dad?” Keegan asked, stepping backward. His face had completely changed. The hurt in his eyes was almost worse than the anger in his voice. “You’re keeping secrets from me? What the actual fuck? And Bay, you knew about this?”“Keegan—” I started.He shook his head.“No. Don’t.” He looked between the two of us, his jaw clenched. “I can’t believe you both knew.”“Keegan, it wasn’t like that,” Baylen said.“Then what was it like?”Neither of us answered quickly enough.That was all it took.Keegan turned and stormed out of the house, slamming the door behind him so hard that the sound echoed through the room.My heart dropped.“Kee!”I ran after him, practicall
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