Novel & Cerita Example Of Poor Writing

We go out into the world under the delusion that we will be creating something, that we will be great, and get so hurt when we trip and fall, instead of sprint. Everyone here wants to believe that they can sprint towards stardom, but not really. We are all stumbling and falling, and in all honesty, I'd prefer some useless cretin to at least laugh at me for all my cuts and bruises than this radio silence, than this ignorance of whether I am doing a good thing or not. Was it the premise that was flawed, or was it the writing? Was it the style and presentation, or was it the plot? Was it the characters, or was it the spelling and grammar mistakes?

As far as apologetic letters go, I think this is the worst one in all of history. Miles isn't very good with words and it's adorable, but it's the effort that counts. There are spots where he wasn't sure if the word he was using was the right one and he erased it so hard he almost ripped through the page. He's better with numbers. "What is that?" Leelie asks as I fold the pages of his apology small enough to fit in my wallet. "You're rocking a crappy velcro wallet? You're ridiculous,"

she said. Then she went back inside. I sat in my car for ten minutes staring at the street. Then I drove home, sat at the kitchen table with a legal pad, and started writing. The first draft took forty minutes and was completely wrong. It had too much explanation. Every paragraph trying to get ahead of her reaction, building a case instead of telling a story. I read it back and heard a lawyer, not a husband so I tore it out. The second was worse. Defensive in a way that made me sound like I was still hiding something even while claiming to confess everything.