Example Of Poor Writing

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Fatma seorang gadis miskin anak tukang sampah. Ia mengalami pelecehan seksual, pernikahan paksa, KDRT, hingga korban penjualan anaknya. Ia ditakdirkan bertemu dengan Ajeng, pengusaha muda yang cantik sempurna dan bersuamikan dokter. Tetapi, anaknya mengalami cacat mental atau autis. Ajeng menawarkan hal besar pada Fatma, yaitu agar Fatma menjadi istri kedua suaminya dan menjadi ibu tiri bagi Lio. Namun, Fatma menolak mentah-mentah. Bapaknya bilang, ia harus jadi wanita baik-baik meski terlahir dalam kemiskinan. Hunjaman penderitaan yang dialami Fatma, pada akhirnya membuat ia berpikir ulang tentang tawaran Ajeng yang sok tulus itu. Fatma mencoba mendekatkan diri kepada Dokter Pandri dan Lio, tetapi keduanya malah menolak. Kalau bukan karena Ajeng yang tiba-tiba depresi dan masuk rumah sakit berkali- kali, Fatma memilih rela disiksa suaminya. Lalu, berkat bantuan Dokter Yudi dan pacarnya, Fatma lepas dan bercerai dengan Surya. Ajeng datang lagi dan memohon agar Fatma menjadi madunya. Fatma setuju. Ia menikah dengan Dokter Pandri walau dokter tampan itu tak sedikit pun mau menyentuhnya. Kecemburuan mulai hadir di antara mereka. Tepat saat Fatma mulai jatuh hati pada sikap sang dokter, mantan suaminya kembali muncul. Lelaki itu membawa rahasia besar, kenapa Ajeng memaksa Fatma untuk jadi madunya. Fatma merasa ditipu. Rasa sopannya pada Ajeng berubah menjadi benci dan dendam. Ia berniat merebut segala hal yang dimiliki si wanita sempurna.

After I slips and falls in the bathroom, I calls out to my boyfriend, Jared Hammond, for help. But all he does is accuse me of trying to seduce him in my wet clothes. "None of your tricks are going to work! I'm not touching you until Elsie graduates!" he yells. He rushes out to help Elsie Sandberg—the younger sister of his first love, who passed away—with her thesis, ignoring my cries and slamming the door behind him. The pain's so intense I nearly black out, but I manage to use the last of my strength to call an ambulance. Later, the doctor tells me I've suffered a serious fracture and need to be hospitalized. I tried to call Jared over ten times, but he never picks up. Then, I see Elsie's latest Instagram post. "Help! How do I win over a ridiculously hot professor?" The photo shows Jared's hand resting on hers as he patiently walks her through her thesis proposal, again and again. After being discharged from the hospital, I agreed to the marriage that Mom and Dad set up. "Yeah. The sooner the wedding, the better," I said.

Azmia, a housewife who has to accept the harst reality. When she is pregnant, Bram (her husband) is dragged into the word of coercion by Bram's bos. Azmia' brain tumor and Bram's infidelity accompanied the birth of their baby. Azmia struggle and tries to save Bram and their househode from the abyys destruction. However, happiness only last from a moment. The dead of her six - month - old baby Micca left a wound in her hearth. Losing Micca made Azmia cold and away from Bram. She's back to being a hedonistict women. Reuniting with Baren (a man whos still loves her) and knowing the life stories of her friends makes Azmia realize what she really wants in life. When Baren and Bram fought over Azmia's love, suddenly Azmia's condition was critical.

Pengkhianatan adalah hal yang tidak dapat dimaafkan. Namun, jika dengan berkhianat dapat memberi keuntungan, lakukanlah. Pukulan dibalas dengan pukulan, darah dibalas dengan darah, pengkhianatan dibalas dengan tipuan. Seorang lelaki tua yang berada di dalam ruangan gelap tersenyum memperlihatkan barisan giginya yang rapi. Sorot matanya tajam, berpakaian serba hitam dilengkapi topi fedora dengan warna senada. "Permainan akan segera dimulai," ujarnya diiringi senyum yang lebih lebar, serta jarinya yang menekan tombol ENTER. Dalam beberapa detik, setiap rumah, gedung, bahkan lampu jalanan kehilangan pencahayaan. Anjing-anjing menggonggong. Suasana malam yang sepi berubah menjadi sangat bising.

In search of true love, Kathleen Sayers, a heiress disguises herself as poor and meets Devon Cross, but their marriage lasted just five years before Devon calls it quits, calling Kathleen a parasite and a burden, unaware of her true identity. Kathleen signs the divorce papers and appears a few months later, Devon boss, in her real identity. Devon sees her and regrets his action. He wants her back but there is someone there already. Kathleen's adopted brother, whom Kathleen is begining to develop feelings for. Who would Kathleen choose? The man that broke her heart, but is socially accepted or the man she is forbidden to love? Please, guys this book is under editing.

Jack is a mysterious man who gives off testosterone with every step he takes; a ladies' man who will turn the life of Lucy Wilson, the most bitter and grumpy waitress in a bar in an insignificant small town, upside down. She, with a life full of difficulties and sadness, meets Jack Thierry, who by his own mistake ends up living in her house against his will. But he is not who he says he is, and soon Lucy finds herself entangled in a web of lies and secrets that will almost make her lose her mind. A misfortune will come into her life and an undeserved revenge that will change everything.

In a world where laughter and chaos collide, meet our hilarious, mischievous, and dirt-poor teenager, who just so happens to be the younger brother of a high-ranking conglomerate. Despite his sharp intellect, he's utterly clueless when it comes to love, especially with a girl who harbors feelings for him. His endearing innocence will leave you feeling excited, irritated, and downright annoyed all at once. Initially timid and fainthearted, this young man's journey to strength is spurred on by his fierce older sister, whose skills rival those of the legendary Yoo Leejin—strong, agile, and exceptionally trained. Together, they navigate the treacherous waters of gang rivalries and thuggish challenges, proving that family ties can forge unbreakable bonds. What can you expect from this rollercoaster of a story? The romance? Oh, it exists and simmers just beneath the surface! The action? Absolutely, with adrenaline-pumping encounters! The humor? A hearty dose of laughter awaits! The mystery? Intrigue lurks around every corner! Join them on this wild adventure and witness their transformation from 'Poor to Perfect'! Watch only on 'Poor to Perfect.' Find me on Facebook: Thai Qu Cing ^^

Sapphire's trapped in her uncle's pack. He hates her in so many ways. Everyone in the pack does, even her cousin Ivory. So, she gets the jobs no one wants to do while Ivory is the golden child. She's got everything and gets away with everything. While Sapphire must pick up her slack in the packhouse. All the while, suffering the hateful words and actions of the pack. Her emotions are mixed as she reaches adulthood. Sapphire expects being cast from the pack. She plans to leave on her terms. Little does she know Ivory wants to remove her from not just the pack, but the world. Magnus is the Alpha of a pack moving into the area. A pack her uncle doesn't want there, but it's small and can easily be crushed in her uncle's estimation. But Magnus isn't stupid. He's not showing his true numbers. He tried to get a non-aggression pact with Sapphire's uncle. But that fell apart after meeting Ivory and Sapphire. It wasn't repairable after the evidence he saw. What unfolds after that is fated mates, misunderstandings, hateful greed, and a poor unfortunate wolf caught in the middle of some dangerous politics. Read on to see what happens when Magnus kidnaps Sapphire and destiny has its way with them.

Raisa had always imagined that her household was a happy one, but an incident where her husband, Arka, turned out to be hiding a big secret behind their household. It started with a contraceptive that Raisa found in her husband's suitcase that led to other suspicions that led her to find out that her husband had been having an affair with their next-door neighbor. Raisa devises a plan to avenge Arka's betrayal and also her affair with Maya. She deliberately let her husband play with fire in their household and made him suffer in the aftermath. On the way to exposing Raisa's husband's lies, the woman reunites with her former boss. A billionaire who is handsome and also concerned with Raisa who is none other than Maya's husband. Will Raisa fall back into the billionaire's arms?