Chasing His Divorced Wife
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Lunch was whatever the fridge offered, assembled without planning, eaten at the counter because neither of us moved to the table.
She talked about the new book while we ate. Not the content, not yet, but the structural question she'd been circling. Whether the return should happen in the first chapter or whether the whole first chapter should be the approach, the reader arriving with the character rather than after her.
"The approach," I said.
She looked at me.
"If the question is what does a place hold, the reader needs to feel the arrival." I paused. "Not be told about it after the fact."