A lot of this debate hinges on what people think Milton's 'tone' really is—is it the baroque, Latinate grandeur or the underlying, almost chaotic energy? I find modern translators often smooth out the syntax to make it more readable, but that loses the original's distinctive, wrestling quality. The Carey-Fowler edition is a classic for a reason; its notes are indispensable, and the translation feels deliberate, trying to map that complex music into modern English. It doesn't sing with the same force, but the architecture is there.
That said, I keep a battered copy of the 18th-century translation by William Hog's illustrator friend around. The language is archaic now, but it has a pomp and ceremonial weight that feels closer to the period's ear. Reading it aloud, you get a sense of the public, performed aspect Milton intended, which some contemporary versions treat as a private, literary exercise. The original's tone wasn't just meaning; it was sound and occasion, something easily lost in purely semantic translation.