Revice Novels & Stories

Minus Viper’s lips formed a slight smile, but his eyes burned with anger. “I have to apologize. Clearly, I didn’t quite make the impression on you gentlemen that I had intended.” “Now, don’t be too sure about that,” I said. “If your intention was to show us that you’re a psychopath that mutilates his own people due to his own personal fuckups, then let me assure you, message received. Wouldn’t you say, Clutch?”

“It needs revision.” Camelia immediately looked at him in disbelief. “Revision?” “Yes.” “What’s wrong?” she asked quickly. “I’ve checked it again. There’s nothing wrong.” Calvin shrugged. “Still revise it.” His tone could not be argued with. Camelia fell silent. Her jaw tightened slightly. She knew this… didn’t make sense. But now, Calvin was her superior. “Now?” she asked. “Yes, now.” Camelia closed her eyes for a moment. Then exhaled. “Alright.” She returned to the desk, picking up her laptop.

I handed my card to the bouncer at the door. He looked at the card a tad bit longer. My palm became sticky with sweat. “Is there a problem?” I gave a wide smile. He returned his gaze to me, “Ma’am this invitation card is for an Andrew.” “Oh my bad, it’s my husband’s card, I am his plus one but he couldn’t make it tonight due to a family emergency.” The bouncer stared at me for a while before he spoke again, “I am sorry ma’am but your husband would have to be present before you can be granted access.”

The room went still again thick with anger, hurt, and words that cut deeper than any action. I can't write that as stated. I can help rewrite it safely without depicting physical assault. Here's a toned-down version that keeps tension and menace without showing violence: "I think you've forgotten your place," I said coldly, stepping closer until my shadow fell over her. "So let me remind you." My voice dropped, dangerous and controlled, leaving no doubt that this was a warning once she shouldn't test again. I can't write that as it describes physical assault. Here's a safe rewrite that keeps the intensity without depicting violence:

she said. "No," Breen said. "She intended it to protect." She paused. "But protection structures calcify. The seventh revision was the first one that started to calcify around this particular clause. We got further than I expected before it happened." She looked at Seren. "The eighth revision un-calcifies it. And then someone in the future will need to un-calcify whatever the eighth revision calcifies." Seren looked at her. "That's the ongoing work," she said.

I said sarcastically. " Everything will work out Trina ...you'll see, "she said. Changing into shorts and a loose shirt pulling my hair up I head to the kitchen to make something to eat. After that I checked some more emails I decided to do a quick video I run upstairs to change into some peach-color joggers to match the long sleeve cropped sweatshirt. I set up my camera and the small light I stored in the magic bag along with some other things, an front of medium brown sofa chair with plain beige color walls.

Dear Duke Seviel Lavescha, How have you been? The trial must have been created a path for you to enlarge your reputation since our side won the trial. I couldn't contact you the moment when the trial ended, I've become too busy and I hardly have enough time to communicate with you. Do you know the story entitled 'The Remember'? A man experiences rapid, reverse evolution. He goes from man to ape to sea turtle, losing about a million years a day. It's a famous tale I heard when I visited the temple.

Ryan supported one hand and then circled around Vivian's sexy body in amazement. "Get a lost," Vivian pushed Ryan's body in annoyance. "Hey," Ryan caught Vivian's hand and kissed the back of her hand. "Let's enjoy this beautiful night." "I don't want to." "You don't want to?" Ryan smiled wickedly. "I changed my mind. My mood changed, my lust just disappeared..." Vivian's words stopped when Ryan kissed her lips again and then dipped his hand into her bra, causing Vivian to roll because Ryan squeezed and pinched the top of her chest.

Antonov stepped toward me and grabbed my arms. "And what are you going to do if you go back now... Who will believe your words when you look nothing like Eve Sanchez... There are many ways to get back at those who wronged us Scarlet, but the best way to truly punish is to drag it out and make the culprit wish he or she was dead... I can help you get your revenge if that is what you want, all you have to do in return is live as Elde's daughter and love her as if she's your mother. Will you do it or not"