I Seduced My Hopeless Romantic Editor
"The suggestion they said was you need to keep your scenarios intact."
Everything I said to her was a lie. For her to calm herself down, I explained to her what she lacked well somewhat are true because it's my own perspective. "I found some loophole in your story, and you forgot an unanswered question, how did Jaime, the lead, suddenly fall in love with Mirna. After they mate in the hotel?"
"What did I forget?"
"You are a romance writer. You should know, and also, you didn't even mention in your story if it's love at first sight or whatnot." I grabbed my glass of water again and took a sip to replenish the wetness in my mouth because I lacked saliva whenever I spoke.