Story Critique Example

Hera Tuazon is a young adult who thinks her life is such a failure. She works in a desktop job where her co-workers and boss mistreat her. She hates fairytales and never believe to such things. With that, love never crosses to her mind, and she manage to be an alpha in her whole life. She had a younger sister whose very fond of fairytale, and is so addicted to a particular story book entitled 'Queen Xena'. One day, out of bored, Hera tried reading the book her sister love, and started dreaming about it for days. She then got into an accident, and woke up to a very unfamiliar place. She then discovered that she might had entered the book, and became Queen Xena herself, and unexpectedly, the King turns out to be the person she hated the most, her boss. On the other hand, Xena is a noble lady who look exactly like Hera. She got forced to be married with the future King as a payment for their family's debt or else the royal family will beheaded her parents. She end up falling in love with the young King but the King hated her as her family was the reason for his past lover's death. What will happen if Xena will suddenly turn into a different person whose not interested with the King?

"Even if I'm just a work of your hallucination, for me, this is my reality. You are my reality. " Angelic Yuzon, is a Psychologist in a well-known psychiatric hospital. She's already contented with her life, reaching her dream job and having a loving family and bestfriend. Being a Psychologist is not an easy job but because of the sworn duty she will do everything just to do her job right but as time goes on she gets closer to her new patient and she promises herself that no matter what happens she will never leave his side. Rue Fabias, a man with a very complex life and situation, he mistaken Angelic as his fiancé before because of his illness. For that reason, he badly wants her to stay in his life. Will Angelic accept the offer to stay together with him under one roof in exchange for a higher wage? or will she accept it because it is what her heart cries out for? As time goes on, a mystery arose about Rue's ex-fiance, will Angelic still stay as she promised herself despite of those? Come find out the bizarre story of Angelic and her patient who came from a casket.

Trina Ellis grew up from a broken family, so while growing up she instilled in her mind that there is nothing good about getting married 'happy ending doesn't exist' though until she met Chiharu Harriz. *** Trina Ellis A.KA. Sky is a spy agent from Equilibrium Agency. One day, the Agency sent her on a mission in Japan to assassinate all the six members of Gokudo Soshiki also known as Yakuza Organization, one of the toughest gang in the country. On the mission, Sky accidentally met Chiharu Harriz o 'Chin' a Japanese-American. He hated Trina for her existence na halos isumpa nito ang dalaga dahil aksidenteng nasira ni Trina ang proposal nito para sa longtime girlfriend nito. Tila ba nananadya ang panahon at palaging pinagkrus ang landas nila, tuloy mahinuhang aso't pusa ang bangayan nilang dalawa. Ngunit paano kung ang hatred will turn into love? Kakalimutan na ba niya ang kanyang paniniwala na happy ending doesn't exist? Disclaimer: This story written in a combination of Tagalog and English Cover design Sheryl Singh

Natali si Emely sa isang kasal na hindi niya ginusto at hindi kailanman gugustuhin. Ngunit para sa kaniyang pamilya, wala siyang hindi kayang gawin. Pinakasalan niya ang ama ng lalaking mahal niya, at nilunok ang lahat ng panghuhusga. Tiniis ang lahat ng masasakit na kapalaran, at pinilit lunukin ang kahihiyan. Kapalit ng pera, ibinenta niya ang sarili niyang kalayaan, pagmamahal, at kaligayahan. Sapat nga bang kabayaran ang pera kapalit ng kaniyang pagmamahal, kaligayahan, at kalayaan? Sapat nga ba ang pera para pawiin ang bawat masasalimuot niyang mga gabi? Sa pagpapakamartir at paghanap ng karamay, ano bang mas tamang piliin, kung ang pagpapakamartir ay papatay sa'yo at ang pagdamay ay mauuwi sa pangangaliwa? Saan hahantong ang kaniyang pag-ibig? Sa kaligayahan ba, katarungan, o sa bilangguan? [DISCLAIMER* The story contains sensitive themes such as marital rape, physical abuse, and adultery that are not suitable for young readers. The following chapters may trigger one's trauma. Read at your own risk.

Pinagtangkaang patayin ni Griff ang kanyang asawang si Althea upang masolo nito ang kompanya ng babae at makasama na nito ang childhood sweetheart nito na si Britney. Ngunit nang araw na itapon sa bangin ni Griff ang bangkay ni Althea ay sakto namang nagmamanman ang mafia boss na si Rigor at nasaksihan niya ang mga pangyayari. Sinagip ni Rigor si Althea at binigyan ng bagong mukha na kawangis sa mukha ng kanyang yumaong asawa na si Sophia. Subalit habang tumatagal ay may kakaiba na silang nararamdaman para sa isa't-isa. Akala ni Althea ay happy ending na ang kanyang love story sa piling ni Rigor. Hindi niya akalaing may darating palang kontrabida. Si Sophia, ang original na nagmamay-ari ng puso ni Rigor. At ang original na nagmamay-ari ng kanyang hiram na mukha. Talaga bang malas siya pagdating sa pag-ibig? At paano nangyaring nabuhay ang matagal ng patay?

Hindi matanggap ni McKenzie Elle Dela Fuentez na magpapakasal na ulit ang kanyang father kaya nagpunta Siya sa isang bar at nagpaka lango sa alak. Ang pagpapakalunod ni Mcki sa alak ay nauwi sa pakikipag one night stand, higit sa lahat ay sa isang babae kagaya niya. Dumating Ang araw na kailangan niya ng harapin Ang katotohanang may dumagdag na sa buhay ng kanyang ama kung kaya nagpunta Siya sa reception ng kasal bilang pag respeto at pag tanggap. Hindi niya lubos maisip na Ang babaeng pinakasalan pala ng kanyang ama ay Ang babaeng naka one night stand rin pala niya. Tignan mo nga Naman kung paano maglaro Ang tadhana sa kanila. Could a happy ending still exist? Abangan natin Ang love story ni McKenzie Elle Dela Fuentez at Allyna Celeste Constantine Di Silvestre sa My Step Mom. Only here at Good Novel.

Pagmamalupit at pang-aabuso ang naranasan ni Emilia sa kanyang tiyahin mula pagkabata niya ito na lang kasi ang tanging kaanak na meron siya kaya tiniis niya ang lahat ng paghihirap niya rito. Sa ika-labing walong taon na kaarawan niya ay binenta siya ng kanyang tiya sa isang bar at dito ay halos hindi niya kinaya ang magiging kapalaran niya. Dito niya nakilala si Ralph ang misteryosong lalaki na nagligtas sa kanya sa isang costumer na pinagtangkaan siyang saktan. Dinala siya nito sa probinsya kung saan ay nagmamay-ari ito ng isang napakalaking lupain dahil alam niya na mabuti itong tao sa pagkakaligtas sa kanya ay labis-labis ang pasasalamat niya rito. Pero may kapalit ang lahat ng pagtulong nito sa kanya dahil pinilit siya nito na maging asawa nito at dito nagsimula na matuklasan niya ang totoo nitong pagkatao at ang totoo niya rin na pagkatao. Original Erotic/Romance story by: Seirinsky

Mafia Academy Series 1 (Book 1 of Red Duology) Kaytlyn Santiago only hates three things in life: rain, cliffs, and her second name. At a very young age, she had already experienced being kidnapped and tortured, pressured and forced into a life she never wanted in the first place. Kayt lived her life carrying all the hardships alone and blaming herself for the death of her mother. She'd already gone through any possible form of pain, making her heart numb and as cold as ice. She chose to build those walls around her that no one could ever break and wear the mask that was almost as perfect as a white lie. But her life changed when she entered the academy. She never once thought that someone would find a way to break those walls she built in. In a battle where she has to choose between her happiness and her family, who should it be, and was it worth taking the risk? She only has one chance, and the future lies in her hands. She mustn't pick the wrong choice. One decision can change everything. One wrong move and the game is over. *** Disclaimer: This story is written in Tagalog-English.

"I will be the villain in your story if that means you’ll stay in mine" ..... Nawala ang mga magulang ni Talitha dahil sa kagagawan ng pamilya Salvador. Kaya ang paghihiganti ang tanging tibok ng kanyang puso. Upang magkawatak-watak ang mga ito, pumasok si Talitha sa mansion nila bilang isang katulong. Ang kaniyang plano? Akitin ang ama ng tahanan at ang nag-iisang anak nilang lalaki. Naniniwala si Talitha na madali niyang maisasagawa ang kaniyang plano—dahil siya ang palay na kusang lalapit sa mga manok. Ngunit nang makilala niya si Locke Salvador, ang tanging tagapagmana, nagbago ang lahat. Si Locke ay singlamig ng yelo at tila walang interes sa sinuman. Kaya ang laro ay bumaliktad: Mula sa pagiging mang-aakit, bigla siyang naging biktima ng mapanganib na atensyon ni Locke. Ngayon, hindi na lamang paghihiganti ang laro. Kailangang maging handa si Talitha na gamitin ang nakakapasong obsesyon ni Locke para matapos ang misyon na nagsimula sa paghihiganti at pighati.

A story of a girl that full of secrets, regret and hatred. She hates his bestfriend so much after the tragedic happen to her. Because of this, her life became miserable. She had a lot of questions that want to answer it but how? Eh, wala nga siyang kumpiyansa sa sarili para ipakita ito. At isa pa, tanging sa diary lang niya siya nakakapagconfess. She wrote everything that came out to her mind. Everything she felt and she wanted to do. Katunayan, marami pang mga bagay ang gusto niyang gawin sa buhay pero dahil sa lagi niyang naaalala ang nangyari sa kaniya ka hindi niya ito magawa. However, She have this darkest secret that no one knows it. Pero papano? If someone knows her secret. Anong mangyayari sa kanila? Are they going to feel or should I say to experience the hell? Now, the exciting question is what if makita niya ulit ang mga taong nagpaghirap at sumira ng buhay niya at lalo na ang taong hindi niya akalain na pababagsakin siya. Would she take her revenge? Would she risk her life? Or in the end mananaig ba ang pagpapatawad.