Story Critique Example

   CONTENT WARNING ⚠️     This is a twisted, forbidden romance featuring steamy content, illegal doings, corruption, and drúg-related crimes. Expect heavy themes of betrayal and moral depravity.     If you are looking for a safe or wholesome story, this isn't it. Read at your own risk. You have been warned. ✧✧✧     Ang asawa ni Ciara na si Luca ay napaka cold, quick-tempered, and possessive, giving her duty, but never real affection. Two years of marriage, Ciara felt trapped, swallowed by shadows and confinement with no escape.     Then dumating si Dr. Collins, the skilled, charming obstetrician her mother-in-law insisted on for their fertility program. But destiny plays cruel games. Hindi lang basta Doctor si Dr. Collins sa buhay ni Ciara, he’s the man she once secretly loved. At bawat titig, bawat tanong nito, unti-unting binabalik kay Ciara ang init na matagal nang nawala sa pagitan nila.     Now Ciara is torn between her husband, whose control is almost too much to bear, and Dr. Collins, who tempts her with a love she knows is forbidden.     Sino kaya ang pipiliin ni Ciara? Her vow to Luca, or her heart that beats for Dr. Collins?

(Nickolas Quinn's story) Trapped series #6 Naniniwala si Catherina na darating ang araw ay mamahalin siya ng kanyang asawang si Nickolas, na balang araw ay magbubunga ang kanyang pagtitiis at pagkapit sa pagsasama nila. Pero hanggang kailan kayang itago ni Catherina ang kanyang luha? Hanggang kailan siya kakapit sa kanilang 'kasal' gayong wala itong ginawa kundi ang saktan siya at pagkaitan ng pagmamahal? Kaya ba niyang panindigan ang pagmamahal para kay Nickolas kung sa bandang huli ay malaman niya ang pinakamasakit na katotohanan na siyang wawasak sa puso niya? TRAPPED SERIES#6. Trapped Series Titles ⬇️ 1.Trapped with him (Alaric) completed 2.The lonely billionaire and his maid. (Damon) Completed 3. His intention (Zandro) COMPLETED 4.Trapped in his wrath (Red) COMPLETED 5.Broken hearts and promises (Miguel) Completed 6. The hidden wife's tears (Nickolas) Completed 7. The billionaire's trick (Liam)ongoing 8.His dangerous trap. (Tres) SOON 9.Forbidden desire (Jack) SOON 10.The billionaire's secret love (Wendell) SOON

Fate in love has been something that Aqee finds interesting yet has never really experienced. She believes fate has its own favoritism, and it wasn't her. Her fate in life was turning bright, yet it made her love story darker by time. Para bang ang kapalit ng success niya sa buhay ay ang mag-isa habang buhay. It wasn't her choice to begin with. She wanted to be loved how she knows love is. Gusto niya maramdaman ang nararamdaman ng iba. Gusto niya maranasan ang nararanasan ng iba tuwing nagmamahal. Kahit hindi na siya baguhan sa isang relasyon, hindi siya tumigil sa paghihintay na baka isang araw ay paglaruan siya ng kaniyang tadhana at makilala ang lalaking iibigin siya hanggang wakas ng paulit-ulit sa iba-ibang pagkakataon. Ngunit handa na ba talaga si Aqee sa pagmamahal na ibibigay sakaniya ng tadhana? O nandyan lamang ang kaniyang hinahanap pero hindi niya lang pinapansin? Paano nga ba makikipaglaro ang tadhana niya sa kaniyang kwentong pag-ibig?

“Isang fake na relasyon. Isang tunay na kilig. Paano kung ang puso ang unang bumigay?” Hindi inakala ni Luna Reyes na ang simpleng pagtatrabaho sa isang coffee shop ay mauuwi sa viral na love story—at hindi rin niya inakalang billionaire pala ang tinapunan niya ng kape. Enter Ethan Villareal—isang mysterious, drop-dead gorgeous CEO na may sariling tech empire. Sa isang maling akala at trending video, napagkamalan silang magkasintahan ng publiko. Imbes na itama ang lahat, may alok si Ethan: pumayag na lang sa fake relationship kapalit ng tulong sa pangarap ni Luna—ang sarili niyang café. Walang commitment, walang feelings. Acting lang. Pero habang tumatagal ang palabas nila, parang hindi na scripted ang mga ngiti, hawak-kamay, at titig. At kung dati, kunwari lang ang kilig… ngayon, parang totoo na. Sa isang mundo kung saan lahat ay pwedeng pekein, paano kung ang puso nila ang maging totoo?

He’s perfect and she’s not. He’s not an alcoholic but she is. He’s good at modeling but she’s better at drag racing and gambling. Everything he has, she doesn’t care. Vander Monterallo is a successful man and is well known as the most popular cover magazine and runway model. He is the epitome of the word perfection from head to toe. His perfect image helps him to reach what he has become. However, his excellent reputation will be put at risk when he forcibly married to Dawn Indiana Silueta, a girl with too many bad habits. Dawn Indiana Silueta is the unwanted daughter and the black sheep of the family. She’s a rebel and uncontrollable woman, that’s what her family thought about her. She’s just happy doing everything outside their perfect house. She loves to explore and tries anything that excites her. However, her freedom will soon end when she is forced to marry a “perfect” husband. Will Vander maintain his perfect image or be screwed up by Dawn? How about Dawn, will she stand being rebellious or will she change because of Vander? This story will prove if the opposite really attracts or if the opposite always fights.

Lumaki si Lara sa poder ng tiyahin. Mala-Cinderella ang buhay niya dahil ginagawa siyang alila ng mga abusadong pinsan. Lahat ng mga gawaing bahay ay pinapagawa sa kanya, ni sweldo niya ay halos walang matira. Ang nobyo na nga lang ang kakampi niya ngunit nagloko pa at gumagawa ng kalokohan sa kanyang likuran. Isang gabi ay napasubo si Lara. Dahil nagkasakit ang pinsan ay siya ang sumalo sa customer nito kahit ayaw niya. Lord K, iyon daw ang tawag sa lalaki. He looks strong and intimidating. His aura screams power, money and fame. Mafia? Billionaire? Hindi alam ni Lara. Ang tangi lang niyang iniisip ay matapos na ang gabi ngunit mukhang ayaw na siyang pakawalan pa ng lalaki! Bigla na lang itong naglapag ng apache case sa harap niya at ngumisi. "Here's 50 million. Marry me and I'll make you my queen." •• THIS STORY CONTAINS A LOT OF MATURE SCENES | PLEASE, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK ••

WARNING: [R18] STORY WITH EXTREMELY EXPLICIT CONTENT She considered herself as Andrew's number one fan. Si Andrew Scott, isang sikat na actor at dito lamang umikot ang mundo ni Lana mula pagkabata. Pangarap niya itong makita at mayakap. Pangarap niya itong pakasalan. Pero hindi niya inakala minsan man na ang lahat ng pangarap at pantasya niya tungkol kay Andrew ay maaaring magkaroon ng mas nakakakilig pa palang mga eksena. Mas higit pa sa inakala niya.Hindi lang madali dahil magkaiba sila ng mundo, kaya napilitan siyang lumayo. Pero tunay nga na nagiging maliit ang mundo sa mga taong itinakda ng tadhana para sa isa't-isa. Dahil muli silang nagkita ng binata makalipas ang tatlong taon. At sa pagkakataong ito alam niyang wala na siyang magagawa pa, kundi ang ipakilala ang binata kay Andrea, ang anak nila na naging bunga ng isang gabing para kay Lana ay siyang katuparan ng matagal na niyang pag-ibig para sa hinahangaang artista.

Sa gitna ng mga pag-aalinlangan may mga bagay na di mo na kailangang pag-isipan. They say that we don't meet people by accident. They are meant to cross our paths for a reason. “Levy!! Levy!!”. Sigaw nito habang tinatawag ako. Unti-unting lumalabo ang paningin ko, namanhid ang buong katawan ko. Huli kung nakita ay ang nag aalalang mga mata ni Elijah habang tumatakbo sa punta sa pwesto ko. Napangiti ako. “I love you, babe. Kahit na hindi na ako.” He could see how they easily fall in love with each other. How they find each other's comfort. Exactly how Elijah Kenzo Ricaford describes his love for Levy…who effortlessly came to his life and turn it into up- side down. Levy Andrew Verde on the other hand, hate the fact that he is attracted to Elijah and how easy he accepts his comfortable feeling towards him. Tama bang mag baka sakali? Tama bang paindigan nila ang komportableng pakiramdam kahit na wala namang kasiguraduhan? This story of two lover who meet but bound to separate because of the cruel situation they are facing. Could they fight for their love? Could two beautiful men find true love in between maybes?

(Nexus Almeradez's story) Annulled si Amara Stephanie sa kanyang asawa. Two years later, nakatanggap siya ng tawag mula sa pamilya nito. Na-aksidente ang dati niyang asawa at tanging siya lang ang naalala nito. Naki-usap sa kanya ang pamilya ng dating asawa na manatili siya sa tabi nito at tulungan itong makaalala. They offer her a big amount of money that she couldn’t resist. Kailangan niya iyon sa expansion ng kanyang business. Tinanggap niya ang offer, nasa isipan na trabaho lamang at walang personalan. Sa perspketibo ng dati niyang asawa, kasal pa sila kaya kung umasta ito ay parang wala itong kasalanan sa kanya. Kung kumilos ito ay parang noong dating mag-asawa pa sila. Nilalambing, binibigyan ng bulaklak at kahit hirap ay inaalala siya nito. Those gestures of him make her weak again. Nexus Almeradez is a walking trouble that she should avoid. Kumakatok na naman ito sa puso niyang nagsisimula na naman mahulog dito. She’s falling for him again and again. Oh no—yes!

READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!! WARNING: MATURED CONTENT. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED! (Miguel La Russo story) At a young age, Gail fell in love with Miguel. She believes that their passionate, wild, and strong feelings for each other will lead them to eternal happiness… But what if she is wrong? Magagawa pa kayang maniwala ng puso ni Gail sa ikalawang pagkakataon sa lalaking unang sumira at nagwasak sa lahat ng mayro'n sila noon? O sa ikalawang pagkakataon ay sisirain ni Miguel ang kanyang mga pangako at iiwan ang puso ni Gail na sugatan? TRAPPED SERIES#5. Trapped Series Titles ⬇️ 1.Trapped with him (Alaric) COMPLETED 2.The lonely billionaire and his maid. (Damon) COMPLETED 3. His intention (Zandro) COMPLETED 4.Trapped in his wrath (Red) COMPLETED 5.Broken hearts and promises (Miguel)Completed 6. The hidden wife tears (Nickolas) Completed 7. The billionaire's trick (Liam) SOON 8.His dangerous trap. (Tres) SOON 9.Forbidden desire (Jack) SOON 10.The billionaire's secret love (Wendell) SOON Genre: ROMANCE/DARK ROMANCE/STEAMY READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!!!!