Good story if you want to ball your eyes out. I don’t really get the point of it is just sad. But despite that I enjoyed reading it. There were some inconsistencies like they were twins at first with the same birthday, then suddenly one was 18 the other 15. But for me it was kinda just like oh well.
2026-06-21 08:14:10
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Karen Rogan
I liked the story, kinda weird but good. I've never read an elf story before so this is my first. I guess not much different but I still liked the little things that were different. I'll definitely try these types again.
2026-06-24 03:51:20
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nibbon
Her age changes halfway through from 18 to 15, which is annoying