She takes him back and starts making excuses for his cruelty. Timelines all over the place. Inconsistent personality descriptions. Plot inconsistencies. It had potential, but ultimately fell victim to the app novel curse: Foregoing quality and plot consistency for quick, formulaic storytelling
2026-03-07 06:18:18
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Anne Susmitha Tabeti
waiting for next updates
2026-01-16 14:50:40
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Dros Kilk
Timeline is absurd. Proof of author's poor lack of interest in her own book. The narration is repetitive and the chapters keep mixing due to the false timeline. Even in the same chapter keeps mixing time and dates. That's disrespectful to your readers paying for a decent read!!! Honestly my POV.