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The Wife He Forgot: Ashes to Empire
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Shikha Saxena
The second wife has a daughter with him of age 7. The first wife children are of age 3 . The time line of marriage, children divorce nothing is adding up. Seems silly
2026-05-14 01:56:31
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Nethmini Wijesooriya
interesting story
2026-04-13 18:09:44
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Swarnalata Basak
...️...️...️...️...️
2026-03-25 16:23:24
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Rachel Ramos
from start I've been hooked.
2026-02-28 22:54:26
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sudha Peter
the times lines and his ages are not adding up
2026-02-08 17:09:15
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amour
5 chapters 1-1-26
2026-01-02 18:41:54
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dreamy
so so confusing
2026-02-23 21:27:18
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The99&2000
She takes him back and starts making excuses for his cruelty. Timelines all over the place. Inconsistent personality descriptions. Plot inconsistencies. It had potential, but ultimately fell victim to the app novel curse: Foregoing quality and plot consistency for quick, formulaic storytelling
2026-03-07 06:18:18
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Anne Susmitha Tabeti
waiting for next updates
2026-01-16 14:50:40
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Dros Kilk
Timeline is absurd. Proof of author's poor lack of interest in her own book. The narration is repetitive and the chapters keep mixing due to the false timeline. Even in the same chapter keeps mixing time and dates. That's disrespectful to your readers paying for a decent read!!! Honestly my POV.
2026-03-15 23:04:40
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