Example Of Poor Writing

First Generation: Entangled Hearts Series #1 Anak nang isang kilalang business owner si Katherine Victoria Von Schmitt. Matapos niyang magbakasyon sa ibang bansa, umuwi kaagad siya sa Pilipinas, at dumiretso sa kanilang bahay. Ngunit hindi niya inaasahan na may naghihintay pa lang malaking problema sa kaniya. Her father was using illegal drugs, got addicted to gambling, and drank liquor as if his life depended on it. Ang nakaiinis pa ay walang alam si Katherine sa mga bisyo ng kaniyang ama. Kung hindi pa dumating ang mga lalaking hindi pamilyar sa kanilang bahay, baka habang-buhay ‘yon itatago ng kaniyang ama. “Your father had a huge debt, Miss Von Schmitt.” Para siyang pinagbagsakan nang langit, at lupa. Ni hindi niya alam kung paano magre-react, dahil sa kaniyang narinig. Nagkaroon sila nang malaking utang, at imposible raw na mabayaran niya ‘yon. Millions din ‘yon, at malaki ang interest kaya mas lalong lumalaki ang utang ng kaniyang ama. “Sign the damn document, Miss Victoria. Be my contracted wife and carry my child,” he mumbled dangerously. “Once you fulfill your duty, you will be free from this setup. You’re not going to pay his debt anymore.”

I am staring at the city lights while having a smoke. It’s been a while since the last time I stayed in this condo. “Mist,” the man called me and I just gave him a boring look. “I want—” “Us back again?” sarkastiko kong sabi, tumango siya kaya tumawa ako. “Sorry, but killing is now my passion, so kill that love of yours.” “Isn’t it love is your passion?” naiiyak na sabi niya. “People change, and I ended that passion.” Iniwan ko na siya sa veranda saka nagtungo sa kwarto nag-ayos ng damit isinuot ang agent suit. Again, I am ready to kill. “Love? What the heck is that, I won’t beg, even if he does, hindi na ako papasok sa mundong yon, that place is chaotic, it is poisonous, venomous that can make you feel ill and numb.” Zyra Mist Alejandro, too tired of loving. If come inside of my heart you can only see words saying ‘end of passion’ because love is a killing potion.

Umuwi si Aria sa Pilipinas matapos ng ilang taong pamamalagi sa United States. Hindi naman siya nahirapan dahil dito rin nakatira sa Pilipinas ang kanyang matalik na kaibigan. Naging maayos at payapa ang buhay niya rito. Hanggang sa makilala niya ang binatang si Jackson Kang na isang sikat na aktor, labis ang paghanga ng matalik na kaibigan ni Aria dito, at biglang napasok ang dalaga sa magulong buhay na ginagalawan ng binata. Naging maayos ang turingan at samahan ng dalawa, ngunit kagaya ng ibang kwento lahat ay may hangganan. Dalawang taong nagmamahalan na pinaglayo ng panahon. Mga pusong nabalot ng sakit at galit. Sakit ng nakaraan ay magbabalik. Magkakaroon pa kaya ng puwang sa puso ni Jackson ang dalagang una niyang minahal? Magkakaroon pa kaya ng pag-asa ang naudlot na pagmamahalan? Magiging happy ending ba para sa kanila o magiging huli na ang lahat?

Isabella Moretti is known to be the best among the rest. A deadly rose amongst a field of daisies. A strong ripple in calm waters. A killer seeking revenge, finds two allies more than willing to lend her a hand. Will she trust them both? Or will she trust neither?

Eden Salicha, seorang pembunuh bayaran handal yang dikontrak oleh Mafia kelas atas demi melancarkan ambisi dan menyingkirkan pesaingnya, berniat ingin mengakhiri karirnya. Namun, sebelum itu dia dapatkan, Eden harus menyelesaikan tugas terakhir dari permintaan klienya yaitu membawa seorang gadis untuk diserahkan kepada Tuan Almond, bosnya. Akan tetapi, perjanjian itu dilanggar oleh Tuan Almond. Tuan Almond memerintahkan anak buahnya untuk membunuh Eden setelah mendapatkan gadis itu. Namun, Eden berhasil meloloskan diri dari maut. Setelah Eden mendapatkan uang dan juga surat jaminan pembebasanya, dia melepas gadis itu. Namun justru, sang gadis tidak mau berpisah denganya. Apa sebenarnya yang terjadi? Siapa gadis itu? Dan kenapa Tuan Almond sangat menginginkanya? Kalau penasaran, kepoin aja ceritanya hanya di GOOD NOVEL dan jangan lupa follow Ig author ya @adriaustin_

The Griffin brothers; Shane and Kane fell in love with the same girl but only Shane captures her heart. When he chooses suicide as a cure to his inoperable cancer, Kane swoops in and confesses his feelings. After three years, Shane reincarnates in the body of a man who went into a coma as a result of a ghastly car accident. This return brings the realization that he will have to contend with his brother for the love of his life without revealing his true identity, least according to the prophecy he dies.

Tragedy from Aki's past that leads to trauma and fear, Aki managed to become the soldier her mother wanted her to be.

Seorang mahasiswi tingkat akhir di salah satu universitas ternama di newyork mengalami hal buruk dari salah satu dosen di universitas nya, kejadian demi kejadian mengakibatkan dirinya trauma berat, depresi dan hampir saja dia mengakhiri hidupnya sendiri.

In the human world, Olympus is merely a fantasy found in books, known as the abode of gods since ancient times. But in another world, Olympus is an enchanted and dangerous place. A place not for gods and goddesses but for peculiar people from the seven castes of power. However, powers have their limitations, and so does Olympus. And, in the midst of war and darkness, a woman struggling with an identity crisis in the human world has mysteriously entered the enchanted world of Olympus. In a world where power is the only way to live, will she be able to survive, especially since she has to deal with the man who possesses one of the elemental powers in Olympus? This isn't just an ordinary world. This isn't just a mere fantasy, nor a figment of imagination. It's the world of Olympus, and it's about the love untold.

Ace runs a criminal organization with his siblings, trained to be unfeeling until he meets Tess. She disappears without a trace, only to come back years later with a daughter he never knew existed. With threats left at Tess's door about her daughter, she has no choice but to return to the Deck Fortress and beg Ace for help. Will the past be too much for them to overcome? Can they eliminate the threat that lingers over them?