REWRITE THE STARS
Every step she took caused the silvery sequined dress to move in waves over her luscious body.
Without touching the other man, she moved slowly, sensually, in front of him, holding her arms over her head. The bottom of the dress barely brushed her thighs as she swayed her hips, closing her eyes.
Mark Elderbrook, along with nearly every other man on the dance floor, had stopped to gawk at her, slack-jawed. The other women on the floor, many of whom were also very beautiful, noticed their men had frozen in place and they, too, turned to glare.