You Perspective In Writing Novels & Stories

“You got a third! You got a third in some made-up crap subjects from an up-graded Polytechnic? Jeez, Benny, that isn’t a degree, that’s a certificate of attendance. That’s a special award for not signing on the dole. I’m afraid there’s no getting away from it, I am superior to you. I think maybe I’m as smart as you are dumb. If you took away this mirror and joined the two of us together you would get one Benny of average intelligence. You’re the kind of voice that gives schizophrenia a bad name. Face it, if you’re going to get anywhere with Sharon you need me. I’m your only hope. Thank whatever gods set this thing up that you’ve got me here to help you. Get the paper, Benny. And a pen that w

He looked at me. “Not a rebuttal. Not a response to this piece specifically.” I was thinking as I spoke, the way writing thoughts arrived, half-formed and needing to be talked into shape. “Something about what this kind of piece does. The machinery of it. How these things get built from partial truths and what it costs the people they’re built about.” I paused. “I’m the right person to write it. And it’s the right time.” Jamie was quiet. “It’ll draw more attention to the original,” he said. Not discouraging. Just accurate.

She looked at him. "All of you," he said. "The clinical precision in the methodology. The specific way you organize argument. The moment in the third section where the evidence chain notation becomes — " He paused. "It becomes personal. Not unprofessionally. But the person writing it is visible in the structure. The way it is built is the way your mind builds things." She was quiet for a moment. "That was the point," she said. He looked at the author name at the top of the draft.

— ¶ ¶ — POINT OF VIEW This story is written in dual first-person POV. You will live primarily inside Raven’s head because that is where the real war is fought. The perspective of other characters would appear selectively when their inner worlds deepen the emotional stakes. You will always know whose head you are in. I will never leave you lost or hanging. Trust me. — ¶ ¶ — AUTHOR'S NOTE Thank you all genuinely. Out of everything you could be reading right now, you chose this. That is not something I take lightly.

SEASON 2 Hello everyone! First of all, if you have made it this far, an endless thank you to you. I appreciate your presence taking the time reading my book. Secondly, I am sorry. I am sorry because I may not deliver the cleanest chain of thought or have a strong plot in a story. I am a new writer and still currently learning as of today. Lastly, I have decided and think heavily that I will put the P.O.V of the second book in the Third Person. I find it more transparent and direct and showcase all the feelings, emotions, and thoughts that a particular character may have.

Not wanting to answer any more questions of hers, he spoke up, “You decide whether it will be from a girl’s perspective or a boy’s.” Becca put the back of the fountain pen on her cheek, thinking whether it was a good idea or not. “What if we write it in such a way that it can reflect feelings of a person? Like, it can be from a boy’s perspective, also a girl’s or maybe of a trans as well.” “That sounds like a great idea,” Lucas said and shoved the notebook towards Becca. “You write it. If Mr. Risorito sees my handwriting, he will make us write three more poems as a punishment for not taking his words seriously.”

"From the material. Because the material is the present." "What gives you distance?" Dante asked. Elian thought. "You do," he said. "When I tell you something that happened in the writing and you give me the structural reading of it. You see it from outside." He paused. "You give me the perspective I can't have by myself." Dante looked at him. "I didn't know I was doing that."

they ask. I answer honestly. Then add, “But that’s not a recommendation.” They smile. “I know,” they say. “I just wanted perspective.” Perspective. Not permission. That distinction matters more than anything else. The loneliness hasn’t vanished. But it has transformed. It’s no longer emptiness. It’s space. Space where authorship can grow in directions not yet defined. Space where connection isn’t constant—but intentional. Space where I am no longer performing usefulness to earn presence. That night, I write the closing lines slowly:

he murmurs, his eyes lingering on me before he steps away. I turn my focus back to the screen, feeling the weight of the story pressing against my fingertips, and dive into the chapters from his point of view. Each line becomes an exercise in truth, revealing bits of him that even I hadn’t fully realized before. I let myself go deeper, daring to write with honesty, capturing the tension and rawness of his thoughts, feeling his intensity seep into every sentence.

|Author’s POV| Hello dear readers. If you are reading this note, I am glad you followed me all through this chapter and I hope to see you at the end of the book. I would love to see more of your comments and suggestions. XoXo. I am sorry for the convenience, but I am going to be writing this chapter in Author’s POV because there are lot of characters that needs to be captured in this chapter and I do not want to have other’s POV that are not too significant! Thanks for your understanding!