What Are Common Mistakes When Trying To Write A Novel From A Manga?

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Vanessa
Vanessa
2025-05-12 00:04:33
One of the biggest mistakes I’ve seen is trying to directly translate the visual storytelling of manga into prose. Manga relies heavily on art—facial expressions, action sequences, and panel layouts—to convey emotion and pacing. When writing a novel, you can’t just describe what’s happening in the panels; you need to dive deeper into the characters’ internal thoughts and feelings. For example, a fight scene in manga might be thrilling because of the dynamic art, but in a novel, it needs to be built through tension, stakes, and the characters’ emotional states.

Another common error is ignoring the medium’s strengths. Manga often uses exaggerated tropes and archetypes that work visually but can feel flat or clichéd in text. A novel demands more nuanced character development and world-building. I’ve read attempts where the writer just copied the manga’s plot without adapting it to the novel’s slower, more introspective pace. It’s crucial to reimagine the story for the written word, not just transcribe it.

Lastly, many writers forget to establish a unique voice. Manga has a distinct tone and style, but a novel needs its own literary identity. Without it, the story can feel like a pale imitation rather than a fresh take. The key is to honor the source material while embracing the novel’s potential for depth and detail.
Theo
Theo
2025-05-11 10:04:18
A mistake I’ve noticed is overloading the narrative with exposition. Manga often uses dialogue and visual cues to explain the world or backstory, but in a novel, dumping all that information at once can feel clunky. I’ve seen writers try to cram in every detail from the manga, thinking it’s necessary for the reader to understand the story. Instead, it’s better to weave the world-building naturally into the plot and character interactions.

Another issue is pacing. Manga chapters are designed to end on cliffhangers or dramatic moments to keep readers hooked. In a novel, this can lead to a choppy, disjointed flow if not handled carefully. I’ve read adaptations where the story felt rushed or uneven because the writer tried to replicate the manga’s episodic structure. A novel needs a smoother, more cohesive narrative arc.

Finally, some writers fail to adapt the humor or tone. Manga often uses visual gags or exaggerated reactions that don’t translate well to text. Without the art, these moments can fall flat. It’s important to find new ways to convey the same spirit, whether through witty dialogue or clever descriptions.
Wyatt
Wyatt
2025-05-09 10:20:00
One mistake I’ve seen is neglecting the inner lives of characters. Manga can show emotions through art, but a novel needs to explore what’s going on inside the characters’ heads. I’ve read adaptations where the characters felt shallow because the writer didn’t delve into their thoughts or motivations. It’s not enough to describe their actions; you need to show why they’re doing what they’re doing.

Another issue is sticking too closely to the source material. While it’s important to stay true to the manga, a novel should expand on it, not just retell it. I’ve seen writers add unnecessary scenes or dialogue just to fill space, which can dilute the story. The key is to focus on what makes the novel unique and use that to enhance the original story.

Lastly, some writers underestimate the importance of setting. Manga often uses backgrounds to establish mood or context, but in a novel, the setting needs to be described in a way that immerses the reader. I’ve read adaptations where the world felt flat because the writer didn’t take the time to bring it to life through vivid descriptions and sensory details.
Weston
Weston
2025-05-10 09:06:50
A common mistake is assuming the manga’s audience will automatically connect with the novel. Manga fans are used to the medium’s visual and narrative style, but novel readers expect something different. I’ve seen writers rely too much on the manga’s popularity without adapting the story to suit the novel’s strengths. It’s important to consider what will resonate with readers who may not be familiar with the source material.

Another issue is failing to balance action and introspection. Manga can show a fight scene in a few panels, but a novel needs to build tension and explore the characters’ emotions during the action. I’ve read adaptations where the action felt rushed or superficial because the writer didn’t take the time to develop the scene fully.

Finally, some writers overlook the importance of dialogue. Manga often uses short, snappy exchanges, but a novel needs more depth and nuance. I’ve seen adaptations where the dialogue felt stilted or unnatural because the writer didn’t adapt it to the novel’s more detailed and introspective style.
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