My Surprise Novels & Stories

she said and then let out a tiny, traitorous giggle. “Arghhh,” I groaned, dragging the sound out. “I hate surprises, especially when you guys are involved.” Liv only raised an eyebrow, the picture of innocence. “You’ll live,” she teased, giving my arm a quick squeeze before quickening her pace to catch up with the others. I exhaled, half dreading, half thrilled. With my friends, surprise could mean anything from a candlelit rooftop lounge to crashing a stranger’s yacht party. Either way, it was too late to back out now.

**flash back** It was the day before my birthday, I was so excited because Alex was going to take me to a concert where akon would be preforming. I called up ma girl Kacie to accompany me to the mall to get a nice dress to wear tomorrow night on my birthday. Alex was my first boyfriend since I left college and I love him daring and would do anything for him. "Hey Kacie, can you come with me to the mall to get a nice dress for my birthday?" I asked happily

Nothing has come into my mind now as I try to guess what surprise is in there for me. Well, let's wait to see the surprise he has!

He’s looking extra handsome with his hair in disarray. “Close your eyes.” There’s excitement in his voice, and as much as I would love to equally be something tells me I might not enjoy it as much “Is it necessary?” I frown looking around us as a cold feeling runs up my spine. “It’s a surprise.” Should I mention that I don’t like surprises, they never brought me anything good to me. I plead with my eyes, trying to make him understand that is not just some whim, that I’m not being a big baby. Is jus the way I react whenever they were in the vicinity.

I inquired, a mix of curiosity and confusion lacing my words. He approached me with a warm smile, his eyes reflecting a hint of mischief. "I thought I'd surprise you, my dear. I missed spending time with you, and I couldn't resist the temptation to join in on the action." A surge of emotions washed over me, a mixture of surprise, delight, and curiosity. I welcomed him into the living room, inviting him to join me on the couch as we continued watching the movie together. It was an unexpected twist to the evening, but one that brought a sense of joy and companionship.

Ashna said grinning. (We have planned a surprise for you.) I watched her skeptically. "Surprise? Mere liye? Kya kand kiye tum log ne?" I said a bit scared. (Surprise? For me? What mess did you create this time?) They all giggled scaring me even more. ∆∆∆∆ "KYA!!!" (WHAT!!!) I almost screamed when I found out there surprise and HE was standing right in front of me in the white beach.

I can’t wait to shower and have a good night’s sleep, my whole body was exhausted. I stepped inside, I was relieved to see my mom wasn’t there. But someone else was. Their back was to me, and I was still far enough away that I couldn’t make out who it was. “Surprise!” The person spun around, a huge smile on her face. “Claire?” My voice caught in my throat. If there was a word stronger than ‘shocked,’ that’s what I was feeling right now. “You didn’t tell me you were coming,” I hurried to her, my heart lifting with excitement.

replied Zero. "Oh, you mean that you are the surprise. I thought there was another surprise," replied Zeva. "How come you don't look that excited? What surprises are you expecting? Is it just me who is in front of you now, doesn't meet the criteria of surprise for you?" said Zero. Hearing Zero's comment, Zeva immediately thought, "Yes, of course, it meets the surprise criteria for me. I've been waiting for the chat since earlier, let alone the person."

Nothing, absolutely nothing at this point in my life, can come to me as a surprise. ~~~~ I walk into my office and everyone immediately stops whatever it is they were up to, to stare at me and they went on with it for what felt like forever. Some look surprised and happy to see me and by some, I meant very few actually and the rest of them look irritated and annoyed but I'm not surprised, they never liked me anyway. I look around trying to find Fabian or Martha but I'm caught off guard when Martha squeals and jumps at me unexpectedly and if she wasn't so small, I'd have probably collided with the floor from the impact but fortunately that didn't happen.

The last time we saw, she still was not speaking to me so I was surprised she was acting this way. Everything was literally a surprise to me, I wasn't expecting any of these at all. “Welcome in, congratulations my darling. You have finally conquered despite all odds,” Nana said. I smiled at her and hugged her. “Do you like your surprise?” Dax asked, whispering in my ears. “Of course, I am so surprised. This is so surprising, I didn't expect this at all! This was definitely the last thing on my mind when I noticed everywhere was unusually quiet,” I replied.