My Surprise Novels & Stories

Do you get what she just admitted? “Surprise!!!” they both shouted in unison as I stared in shock.

Molly catches my eye and shrugs showing the two emotions that I am feeling: Discomfort and disappointment. I angle my sight up to Nate to see his mouth open and shut but no words come out. "Surprise," I say in a mouselike voice. "What exactly is going on?" Nate asks, his hand tightening in mine. I sigh. "It's a surprise party but it seems word somehow got out and it looks like you have more people who adore you than just me." I try really hard to make this situation seem less alarming than what it is. "Is there alcohol here?"

He calls, jerking me out of my reverie. "Yes, sorry." "You were lost in thought again? What is the problem?" "Nothing, I just woke up", I give him a lame excuse. He is quiet for a while before saying. "Can we see tonight?" I did not know how to respond to that. "I have a surprise for you", he adds and my heart begins to race with curiosity. A surprise? What surprise does he have for me? Is it something I am going to like? Did he get me a gift or is he going to...."

I froze in shock, nearly having a heart attack. “Suprise.”

Hе rаіѕеd аn еуеbrоw аnd said, “Wеll, thаt’ѕ a ѕurрrіѕе.” I ѕwаllоwеd; I dіdn’t knоw hоw tо tаkе his соmmеnt. I thоught аbоut іt tоо much аѕ hе ѕаіd іt, аnd thаt’ѕ whеn thе mоmеnt was ruined. A ѕurрrіѕе thаt I wоuld hіt on him? A surprise that hе’d like іt? What wаѕ a ѕurрrіѕе? That I won? I wаѕ dуіng to ask, but I dіdn’t hаvе the соurаgе аnd the moment was lost.

It was Sophia and not my mother as I expected . Hey bitch , what’s up ? Sophia called out excitedly . “ Well , if you stop calling me a bitch, then we can have a normal conversation . “ Sorry I got on your nerves , but I think that I have a surprise for you . “ What's that , you know I hate surprises. “ Come out . “ what ?” Come out b , you surprise is waiting , and the other end went silent , she had ended the call . I didn’t know how to feel , Sophia knew how much I hated surprised and yet she still does that like it doesn’t matter what I feel or not .

he says with a smile, breaking the silence. My heart drops. Who's out there? Why is he calling it a surprise? I take deep breaths to calm myself. I don't want to panic here. I clear my throat and say, "Really? What kind of surprise?" "Oh, you're going to love it." He leaves the warehouse momentarily. I lower my eyes and stare at my lap. I'm shaking all over. What's he talking about? What fucking surprise? I can't breathe. There's a lot of pain behind my eyes and it feels like they'll jump right out of the sockets and land on my lap. This hasn't facilitated anything for me.

I ask not wanting to wait. Brandon rolls his eyes dramatically. "My dear dear dear Braze. Did I not mention that it is a SURPRISE?" "And?" Braze urges. "Surprise. S.U.R.P.R.I.S.E. AKA you do something for a person without the person knowing what you did. Surprise. Which means I will not tell you where we are going." Brandon clarifies impatiently. "And stooop askiiing! I will lose myself and give in to you"he whines and I smirk. I'm about to ask more questions when he places his hands over his ears. "Lalalalalalalaaaaa"he starts and I stick my tongue out.

Instead, I asked him something he didn't expect. "Do you believe in love?" And his answer was more surprising to me. "I do." And my shock ,my surprise was clear on my face. My mouth hung open at his answer. "What? Don't look at me like that?" "I just.... it's..you know....I mean it's you . It is ....um... what's the word?.." I couldn't find words to express my shock. "Surprising? Shocking? Stupefying?" He helped me with the word.

Saying that Di walked to the house beside me while I left a prayer wishing my family will not be hurt after this truth is revealed. However, I didn’t expect what he did after hearing everything from Di. Like we three must have thought something different with Di expecting devastated face and James something while I expected anger but he gave an unexpected reaction like completely unexpected for all of us.