ON MY HOCKEY BULLY'S BED (BLACKTHORN ELITE)
"You're making her uncomfortable, and I don't like it."
His voice was harsh, and his eyes burned with anger.
I looked at Mae, but I couldn't bring myself to say anything. My fists clenched at my sides. My mouth opened to speak, but the words died in my throat when I saw her staring back at me with a knowing look.
"Cole, let's get out of here. Students are already starting to gather," Mae muttered, still holding on to him.This version keeps Marlowe's jealousy, humor, and heartbreak while making the narration flow more naturally.
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