Story Critique Example

What if someone is watching you? What if your friends mysteriously die? What if one day you wake up and you are inside the box? Know the perfect example of Stockholm syndrome and how it connects to the lens of the camera. Get thrilled, suspense and fall-in-love with Lady and how did she survive the pain of being heartbroken that her long term boyfriend caused her. How did she survive from all the threats that her captor caused her and who will she go to choose at the end? Her long term boyfriend who cheated on her or her captor who makes her life a living hell? find out and get thrilled, braced yourself to fall-in-love in the story of LENS

Warning before reading this book, it contains 3 different novels which I know you'll love.. Blurb- The first story is set in the 1800, in the Kingdom of Nevera; she's got a wicked stepmother who intends to ruin her life! Her betrayer of a lover! A toothless fat farmer for a suitor given to her of course by her beloved stepmother.. A ball she needs to attend to save her life from being tortured forever! This story is filled with kinds of drama, but thrilling and it's filled with adventures, Cindy is a simple girl who desire a simple life but fate has so much in store for her! Her story will be changed, disrupted and shaken the moment she decides to take charge of her life, she meets her drunken fairy godmother and her life took a drastic turn... For example like the king of Nevera chasing after her because he wants her in his bed over and over again! There's no escape because she can't simply outrun her vampire king! Find out by reading this amazing story how she tries to outrun fate and other obstacles standing in her way to a happy life

During a charity gala, my boyfriend bids on a pair of matching watches but gives one of them to his true love. The media excitedly capture the scene and ask, "You bought a million-dollar watch without even batting an eye, Mr. Loewe. You've been single all these years—is it time for you to make an official announcement on your relationship status?" Everyone off stage applauds him, and I join them. I give him my blessings for his so-called announcement. To make it up to me, he attends my birthday celebration. Yet he pushes me into the cake to make his true love happy. Unbeknownst to him, there's a steel rack in the cake to keep it steady. I end up bloodied and on the brink of death.

Vaibhav Shergill(25) | Naira (18) The complex, complicated, love story of the two weired copules who unfortunately dragged by fate together. Having reasons respectively, they ended up in tying the knot, forcefully or unwilling, give the term whatever you feel right. She looks innocent. Have you ever heard about :- don't ever judge by it covers! Same here.She is badass. Innocent, the word itself run away from her. He is a silent creature. Silence , yeah! She is nowhere to be around. He is south, she is north. If, he is East , no dobut ! she is west. Poles apart. But ened up together. Would they really end up together? Or ,they will end up everything together? Rollercoaster is in its way! - Epitome of love. Perfect example of loving relationship.

Ses lèvres effleurèrent son oreille, sa voix basse et mortelle. "Je ne fais que commencer, Marissa." Le célèbre critique d'art et milliardaire Adrian Cross a tout, sauf la clémence. Alors, lorsque l'étudiante en art Marissa Hayes, pleine de défi, ose le défier, il jure de briser son sang-froid petit à petit. Mais le jeu qu'il commence les consume bientôt tous les deux, transformant la rivalité en quelque chose de bien plus dangereux. Entre fierté et passion, amour et vengeance, un faux mouvement pourrait les détruire tous les deux pour de bon.

The housekeeper deliberately reveals her busty chest when I'm out of the house. She says coquettishly to my husband, "Oh, my. This is an accident, Mr. Houston …" My husband looks like he's focusing on his drink, but he keeps sneaking looks at her. I see all of this from the housekeeper's livestream.

Aku tak tahu harus mulai dari mana. Semua berjalan begitu cepat. Dalam waktu satu tahun, hidupku sudah berubah 180 derajat. Keluargaku hancur begitu saja. Segalanya berawal dari satu keputusan yang fatal, yang perlahan merenggut mereka satu per satu. Rasanya air mata ini sudah habis untuk menangisi kepergian mereka yang terlalu mendalam, sementara aku hanya bisa berdiri diam, menyaksikan semuanya terjadi tanpa bisa berbuat apa-apa. Namaku Azarea Andini Sanjaya atau biasa dipanggil zara, anak pertama dari seorang pengusaha properti di timur pulau jawa milik Ardian Sanjaya nama dari papaku . Sejak kecil hidupku selalu berkecukupan. Walaupun ada satu yang kurang, yaitu kasih sayang seorang ibu.

They tried to take everything from her: her sanity, her pride, and her daughter. Cast out into a storm by her own husband, Avery Reed was branded a disgrace simply for giving birth to a daughter. Her enemies called her unstable and labeled her child a failure, and for a moment, she almost believed them. Until he arrived. Ashton Knight wasn't just a man from her past; he was a billionaire who could buy and burn his enemies' worlds to the ground. He offered her protection within his fortress of luxury, promising to turn her tears into ammunition and her wounds into strength. Her enemies thought they were fighting a broken woman, but they had no idea that behind her now stood a king, ready to burn their entire dynasty to ash. As she takes refuge in his dangerous embrace, Avery must wonder... does she only want justice, or does she want his heart as well?

จากมาเฟียหนุ่มมาดโหด สายตาดุนิ่งราวกับยามรัตกาล ที่มองใคร คนนั้นเป็นต้องหลบสายตา แต่เมื่อชีวิตมาเฟียสุดโหดต้องเข้าโหมดมีลูก

Landon Mikaelson knew he made a terrible mistake when he let his wife out the door and out of his life permanently. It was supposed to be an arranged marriage between the both of them. A deal to act like a married couple for a year and a half but circumstances began to pave way for mutual feelings he didn't want. So he divorced her and let her go which turned his life around for the worse but something takes him to her door and making him plead for a second chance,a secret kept by her that changed their lives forever. What is it??. Well find out yourself.