Story Critique Example

(Castiel Revamonte’s Story) Alam ni Joana na hindi permanente ang pananatili niya sa tabi ni Castiel—ang asawa ng kanyang kakambal. Pinalitan niya ang kanyang kakambal sa pagpapakasal dito hanggang sa makabalik ang babae mula sa kung saang lupalop ng mundo. Ayos na sana kung hindi lang pasaway ang utak, puso at katawan niya. Minahal niya si Castiel at bumukaka siya rito na hindi naman dapat. Kaya naman nang bumalik ang kanyang kakambal, wala siyang nagawa kundi luhaang iwan ang lahat. Iniwan niya si Castiel ngunit dala-dala naman niya sa kanyang sinapupunan ang pinunla nito. Four years later, they met again and he was mad—raging mad at her for leaving him and for keeping their daughter.

Marco Elizalde is the literal definition of perfection. He was the "Son of Heaven" and the golden boy of a powerful family. For four years, si Elena Valdez lang ang kaisa-isang reyna sa altar niya. Everyone thought they were endgame, until a messy scandal turned their love story into a public nightmare. Five years later, fate brought them back together. Idiniin siya ni Marco sa pader, his eyes burning with pure hatred. "Disappear cleanly. Huwag ka nang magpapakita sa akin," he hissed. Elena’s answer? Isang maikling, "Okay." Pero kahit anong pilit ni Marco na lumayo, he’s still hopelessly obsessed. Nang mabunyag ang katotohanan, the proud prince finally broke. With bloodshot eyes, he gave her an ultimatum: "Marry me, at ako na ang magpapasan ng lahat ng utang mo."

What would you do if when you woke up one day that your parents just dragged you into an engagement you didn't expect? The man you have admired for a long time is the one you can marry? will you back out or will you grab the opportunity to get closer to him although you know that he is into others? This is the story of Celestine Bianca Emperial, The Unexpected wedding. --- This is a work of fiction, Names, characters, places, and incidents either are the product of the authors imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual person living or dead, events or locales is entirely coincidental. All right reserved. No portion of this publication may reproduced, distributed or transmitted in any form or by any means, including photocopying, recording, or other electronic or mechanical methods, without written permission from the copyright author. Disclaimer: Possible typographical errors, wrong spellings, grammatical errors, or whatsover errors.

Amara Ysabelle Santiago is a 21-year-old architecture student who has lived most of her life trying to survive, not to dream. Raised in a small province and thrust into Manila by a scholarship, she never expected to catch the eye of the country's most powerful and cold-hearted billionaire, Killian Alaric Dela Vega. When their paths collide due to an unexpected business arrangement involving her estranged father, Amara finds herself locked into a marriage contract she can’t escape. He’s rich, ruthless, and emotionally frozen. She’s warm, stubborn, and hiding a past darker than he could ever imagine. Will Amara melt the ice surrounding Killian’s heart, or will she shatter in his world of power games and betrayal? This is the story of a girl forced into a cold billionaire’s world, where love was never part of the deal—but destiny had other plans

Nang dahil sa isang katuwaan ay nagkagulo-gulo ang buhay ni Freya Zayara Quinzon. Isang dare na pinagsisisihan niyang ginawa niya sa buong buhay niya. Ang dare na halikan ang basketball captain na si Xavier Davon Conner, isa sa kinaiinisan niya sa loob ng kanilang paaralan. But what if ang dare pala na iyon ang dahilan upang maturuan niyang muli na magmahal ang sarili? What if ang dare pala na iyon ang magbabago ng buong buhay niya? At paano kung ang dare palang iyon ang magbibigay sa kaniya ng matagal na niyang gusto? Tunghayan na'tin ang pagbabago sa buhay ni Zayara after she was DARED TO KISS CAPTAIN. WARNING! This story contains vulgar words which are not suitable for young readers.

After 10 years, Ang "love" namin sa isa't-isa mula ng magkakilala kami, Hindi na ba magbabago? Dito magbabago ang lahat? Mas lalalim din ba ang relasyon namin at i-lelevel up ba sa pang-matagalan na pagsasama. Baka naman, dito pa lang magsisimula ang tunay naming pagsubok sa relasyon, We said. — My passion for fan fiction / romance will return. But, "love stories" are no longer about women and men. But, the story is about LGBTQ. I am not against them. I am open-minded in this relationship. Not the worldliness of other "things" about their relationship. — Copyright 2021 © Xyrielle All Rights Reserved No Copy Stories No Plagiarism Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, business, events and incidents are the products of the author’s imagination. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

(SPG WARNING! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!) Matapos ang isang hindi inaasahang one night stand, nagkasalubong muli ang landas nina Mariah Isla Ledesma at Dominic Camero sa isang pagkakataon na hindi nila inaasahan. Inalok ni Isla si Dominic ng isang part-time job bilang personal assistant at driver, sa akalang siya’y isang simpleng lalaki na may sapat lang na kinikita sa isang araw. Hanggang sa tumagal, unti-unting nauwi ang kanilang boss-employee relationship sa pagiging fuck buddies. Ngunit ano ang mangyayari kapag nalaman ni Isla na ang lalaking pinapasahuran niya ay mas mayaman pa sa kanya? Could this be the beginning of a love story they never saw coming, or will unexpected challenges put their connection to the test?

Tatlong taon ang nakalipas magmula noong ikasal si Celestine Vienne Hervilla kay Zion Delgado. Sa kabila ng lahat ng pinagsamahan nila, nauwi rin sa hiwalayan ang kanilang relasyon, lalo na nang sabihin ni Zion na mahal nito si Thalia, ang babaeng bagong kahihiwalay lang sa matalik nitong kaibigan na si Chester. “Leaving you will be the biggest mistake he ever made,” “Marry me, Vienne, and we’ll show him exactly what he lost.” Desperate to rebuild her life, she turns to Zion's uncle, a man whose power and influence could provide the fresh start she so desperately needs. ⚠️ WARNING: This story contains strong language and explicit content that may not be suitable for young readers. Reader discretion is advised. Thank you.

Si *Amilia Guerrero* ay isang ulila na lumaki sa simpleng bayan ng San Rafael. Dahil sa kabutihan ni *Don Manuel San Sebastian*, isa sa pinakamayayamang tao sa bayan, nakapag-aral si Amilia bilang iskolar. Kilala siya sa paaralan bilang maganda, matalino, at palaban sa mga patimpalak, ngunit kahit marami ang humahanga at nanliligaw sa kanya, wala siyang pinapansin. Samantala, si *Daniel San Sebastian*, ang kaisa-isang apo ni Don Manuel, ay isang 32-anyos na binatang kilala sa kanyang yaman at kakisigan. Bagaman maraming kababaihan ang nahuhulog sa kanya, wala pa ni isa ang nakasungkit ng kanyang puso—hanggang sa makilala niya si Amilia. --- Please Read With your own risks.. Story written by: Dwivirain02

It wasn't just a story about love and a happy ending—not all stories end that way. It all began when a sweet, innocent young girl fell in love with a kind, handsome young boy. Serapina Mondragon fell for Damon Romanova when they were young, but he bitterly refused to love her, hurting her in every way. What hurt her the most was that, even after their wedding day, he still refused to love her. Because of the pain and heartache, she went abroad and became the woman she always hoped to be: strong, independent, and, most of all, full of hatred for her so-called husband. For so many years, she had been hiding, not wanting to see him. But now that she has the courage to face him, he better hide because she's coming right at him with full force. DISCLAIMER: it is a work of fiction,names, companies, places and events was fictional