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Memiliki sahabat yang setia memang diinginkan oleh setiap orang. Selain menjadi teman dalam suka dan duka namun sahabat juga adalah salah satu anugerah dari Sang Maha Kuasa . Lima insan yang berbeda namun memiliki tujuan yang sama yaitu menjadi sahabat sejati. Ada masanya mereka harus bersatu dan ada masanya pula mereka harus berpisah. Walau sempat berpisah tapi takdir tetap menyatukan mereka hingga akhirnya kebahagiaan pun menjadi milik Zella dan keempat sahabatnya.

ในวันที่ฉันรักเขาจนหมดหัวใจเขากลับบอกเลิกและทิ้งฉันไปอย่างไม่ใยดี ผ่านมา7ปีเขากลับเข้ามาอีกครั้งแล้วบอกฉันว่า “ดินยังรักอิงอยู่นะ” ขอโอกาสในวันที่ฉันไม่มีให้เขาแล้ว

Dita's fate changed drastically after meeting a handsome, but cruel guy. She accidentally witnessed him torturing his victim in an empty house at night. And unfortunately, she was caught. Since the night after the incident, her life became unsettled when it turned out that the guy was after her. What is Dita's fate after meeting a Psychopath guy who likes to torture, not even hesitating to kill his victims. Will she be able to escape from him?

Pasvaati. Pusaka Ajaib tersimpan di Tanapura sejak ratusan tahun silam, menunggu kemunculan Sang Pewaris dengan bakat 'Jiwa Murni'. Taja menelusuri jejak tidak asing. Sepenggal mimpi, ingatan yang patah, Sosok Tak Kasat Mata dan Pusaka Legenda, menghimpun teka-teki kehidupan dirinya. Terbentuklah regu Ksatria Pemanah, kemudian bersama-sama mengerahkan 'Senjata Pamungkas' ke angkasa. * * *

Abandoned by her mother, Vivian worked alone to raise her younger brother. Determined to change her life, Vivian becomes a cunning schemer when targeting Jaime Miro, heir to a fortune worth millions of dollars and a large company. When Jaime falls in love with Vivian and marries her, her life becomes tense when she discovers that the mother who abandoned her before is now Jaime's stepmother, and is about to become her mother-in-law. Vivian takes advantage of her marriage to get her way, but when Jaime discovers she only married him for money, the peace in the house is destroyed, and she is thrown out. That night, a fire broke out at Vivian's apartment complex. Jaime thinks she's dead, but two years later she reappears, will he get revenge?

Imagine the worst female softball team you ever saw, triple it, and you've got Darci Bloom's baseball team. Darci's got a lot to handle this season. She's ended up in a team full of nonathletic misfits. She's got a huge crush on the girl making a documentary about the team. She's got a difficult dad. Now a crazy Russian couple shows their interest in coaching her team. Will this bunch of weirdos going to blast into her life and change it forever? Will they fall apart or can they win the unexpected?

In a car, Matteo Gallagher kisses Evelyn Walsh until she's breathless and entranced. She's been stripped, but he's still fully clothed. The stark contrast makes her blush. Matteo wraps an arm around Evelyn's waist and pulls her close. He chuckles and whispers, "The soundproof divider is up, so the driver can't hear you. He wouldn't dare listen in, anyway. Why are you so shy?" She watches as he intensifies his ministrations on her and throws her arms around him. Love fills her eyes, and she's about to reach her climax. Just then, a phone rings, interrupting them.

Kisah ini menceritakan kisah cinta sepasang Kekasih berbeda kasta. Kinanti Larasati gadis kampung yang memiliki hubungan asmara dengan murid baru di sekolahnya yang bernamaKinoy Prayoga. pada awalnya hubungan percintaan ini baik-baik saja.penuh keromantisan,hingga membuat orang yang melihat mereka akan bawa perasaan. Namun saat hubungan cinta itu terdengar oleh orang tua Kinoy. hidup kinanti mulai berantakan.orang tua Kinoy sangat membencinya karena miskin. Lalu Kinanti di minta menjauhi Kinoy.tak cuma itu saja,ornag tua Kinoy berencana akan membuat hidup Kinanti sangat menderita. Akankah Kinanti dan Kinoy kembali bersatu? akankah cinta sejati menyatukan mereka?

DINUKOT sila Raven at Asher, dinala sa napakalayong isla. Doon ay magkasama nilang hinarap ang panganib, but unfortunately, Asher was doomed and she could do nothing but leave him for a moment when he was slowly swallowed up by death. Raven survived with Steven's help, but that survival nearly took her life after she was taken away by a handsome young billionaire, Kayden, who was the mastermind behind her abduction. He took her to a private island, Isla Alcaraz, owned by Kayden, where she was forcibly married to him. As they say, the past is the past. Hayaan na lamang natin iyon doon at kalimutan. Ngunit paano, if the past is the only thing that keeps you alive in the present? And what if, you unexpectedly see the person you thought was long gone after all this time?

Celeztine Dior is a tourism student at one of the Philippines' most prestigious universities. Everything was fine until her father became ill and she required a large sum of money for his operation and daily medications; she couldn't afford to lose her father. Celeztine was known as being a demure and modest woman in class but she'll turn herself into another lady they didn't expect her to be, she'll become the mistress of a well-known Governor in the city, no love, just money. Zeus Lincoln, the famed drop-dead gorgeous snob architecture student, is the man who controls her heart. She made a mistake by allowing him to date her; she underestimated how difficult it would be for them to be together, especially when she discovered that the guy she genuinely loves is the Governor's son. What if Zeus discovered that Celeztine is his dad's Mistress? Will love triumph or will he succumb to his hatred for her?