Story Critique Example

Hindi man naging maganda ang unang pagtatagpo ng mga landas nina Mayumi at Kalel dahil sa aksidenteng nangyari; at nag-umpiisa mang parang aso’t pusa ang dalawa, but they still couldn’t stop their feelings for each other. They fell in love with each other. But how will their love story have a happy ending if Mayumi discovers something? Mayumi discovers that the father of her love interest is accountable for her mother’s death. Can she put aside the anger that her heart feels for the sake of Kalel begging her? Or will she choose justice for her mother that she has lo deng wanted to get? Which one will she choose? Justice? Or her love for Kalel Monteverde?

It's crazy to give someone your heart, and in return get treated like crap. Mahirap. Masakit. Nakakaloko… To love someone who can't love you back. Yung ginawa mo siyang mundo, habang ikaw isang orbit lang para sa kaniya. Ikaw na laging available para sa kaniya, habang siya walang oras para sa’yo. Hanggang kalian ka magtitiis sa relasyong ikaw lang ang totoong umiibig? Kaya mo bang manatili sa piling niya… kahit alam mong ginagamit ka lang niya dahil alam niyang mahal mo siya? A love story that started from the complicated past of their parents. Could they prove that love wins after all?

TEASER Abelina was forced to enter a terrifying life in the hands of leonardo da villo. the only son of the murderer of her beloved parents. she was full of courage when she decided to marry him,even though she didn't love him.so she can take revenge on the family she hates so much.even though Leonardo was so handsome and muscular,she still couldn't love him because of the anger and hatred she felt. But how can she carry out her long-planned revenge if all Leonardo shows and does for her is kindness?or is he just pretending to be nice to win her heart? WARNING:SPG This story contains strong language and scenes. If you are eighteen or under, strict parental guidance is required.

The things between truth and lies, honesty and secrets, trust and doubt. We surround ourselves with the right people and good people. People we trust and most of all, people we think they deserve to be a part of our lives. Truth can be manipulate. Lies can destroy. Trust can easy to break. Honesty can set aside. Secrets can keep you guilty. Doubt can bring out your fears. But what if your life of truth is full of lies, and those persons who you trust are keeping secrets and what if your life of honesty turn into doubt. I am Divina Clare Reyes and this is my story, life that I thought full of truth, full of trustworthy and honest people but it turned out to be full of lies and secrets.

A successful marriage is a big dream for every woman out there. Wanting the so-called-perfect-family. Pero magiging perpekto ba ang lahat kung sa mali nagsimula? Magiging totoo kaya ang relasyon nila? O mananatiling nakabase sa kontrata ang lahat? Magiging sapat ba ang tiwala at pagmamahal? Para sa mga pagsubok na ibibigay? May malalaking rason na darating para bitawan isa't isa pero maraming bagay na magpapatunay na walang makatutumbas sa isang tunay na pag ibig. Will the the love they had will be enough for them to stay in each other's arms? Or Will they let the destiny break their marriage? Maybe their story started as unwanted but will they let it ended by their broken vows?

(Tamahome and Lia's Story) After being buried alive by her ex-fiance and adopted sister, Lia Reed survived miraculously and promised herself to get back on the two. While performing her duty as a doctor, she met Leon Ashton, his ex-fiance's uncle. Leon was captivated by her beauty and when his grandmother came, he suddenly grabbed her hand and introduced her as his bride-to-be! Knowing Leon, Lia decided to play along and schemed a dangerous plan. Mauuwi ba sa totoong kasal ang kanilang nilagdaang contract marriage? Mahihilom ba ng hindi inaasahang pag-ibig ang malalim na sugat ng nakaraan o mas lalo lamang silang masasaktan?

Lalaine Xerano once dreamed is to being part of an exclusive documentary company. She pursues her dream even if she finds out that the company hired her for some other reason— to uncover the very influential person. Maximus Luciano, is a high-profile Capo Dei Capi, a half Italian half Filipino citizen. He was also known as a dangerous leader of the Lotus Organization. While she was reading his records, it was as if she was already in danger. When the top management guaranteed her future career, without a second thought he immediately accepted it. Will she succeed to tame the mafia lord? Or her drill will only lead to her defeat? ______________ Content Warning: This story has mature scenes which are not suitable for young readers!

Wounded Ego Series Chronology °WOUNDED EGO: Omega’s Disguise °WOUNDED EGO SIDE STORY: An Alpha’s Dilemma How far can you go in order to feed your own ego? “Twenty thousand dollars for every session. Have sex with me and keep your mouth shut.” These were the words that my Alpha boss left me the moment I caught him doing something shady inside his very office. It was obviously bribe money to prevent me from ruining his image. But even so, I still accepted his offer for the sole reason that I’m interested in knowing his true nature. But never did I thought that this curiosity of mine would only lead me into a much troublesome circumstance.

A romance story that revolves around a woman who enters a challenging job. Sa kabila ng malagim niyang nakaraan, sinubukan mabuhay ng normal ni Safirah kahit mag-isa na lamang siya sa buhay. Pinilit niyang huwag tumanggap ng kahit anumang tulong mula sa ama na matagal na niyang kinamumuhian. Kahit alam ni Safirah na mayaman ang kanyang ama ay pinili niyang humanap ng sariling ikakabuhay hanggang sa pumasok siya sa buhay ni Terence na siyang magiging amo niya. Makakayanan niya kayang pigilin ang sarili na hindi umibig sa kanyang amo o paninindigan niya ang pagiging man-hater dahil sa naranasan mismo ng kanyang sariling ina sa ama niya noon?

WARNING: MATURED CONTENT | R-18 Logan Castillejo has everything in life. Money. Power. An easy-going playboy who's dripping with sexiness and menace. A walking sin draped in an expensive suit. Logan Castillejo isn't the man you should mess around and make a deal with. He orders and everyone submits. Well, not until he meets Calli. An alluring, sweet, and innocent woman who makes Logan's world upside down. He finds himself drawn and mesmerized by her. This shouldn't be a problem, he always gets what he wants. Love. Darkness. Betrayal. A beautiful story of two people fighting for their love in a world full of darkness and doom. Sin will never be the same again for Logan and Calli.