Mother-in-Law Knows Best
While he soaked up the fresh air, I set up with my laptop to work on my novel.
I wrapped up a strong chapter but hit a wall, staring blankly at the screen. Nearby, Luca had just finished his bottle and was napping peacefully, looking like a little cherub with his chubby cheeks.
Out of nowhere, Frank appeared, a lunchbox in hand. He set it on the table with a warm smile. "I made this myself. Mind giving it a taste and letting me know what you think?"
Before I could say much, he slid into the seat next to me, leaning over to peek at my laptop. "I've been keeping up with your novel. It's really good, but this part between the leads feels a little flat. Maybe you could try something like this...
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