Story Critique

She spent her life striving to be the perfect Luna for her Alpha husband—sacrificing everything for the pack and his interests, never once saying no. But when her relentless efforts led to her wolf falling ill, and the doctor warned that if it didn’t wake within three months, her life would be forfeit... no one believed her. They thought she was just being dramatic. Now, she’s decided to break free. Before her time runs out, she’ll make sure to confront every person who ever mistreated her—including her husband and his family. They’ll call her crazy. But the once-proud Alpha who stood above her is now chasing after her, begging her not to leave...

Since the age of 12, Aurora had known that she would be Raymond’s future Luna and wife. However, just before inheriting his Alpha position, Raymond found his fated mate—a rogue girl named Giana. Forced by his parents, Raymond had no choice but to marry Aurora. Yet on their wedding night, he abandoned her to be with Giana. Tormented by the mate bond, Aurora ended up having an ONS with a handsome and charming man. But how could that man turn out to be Raymond’s best friend, the Alpha King’s nephew, and notorious playboy—Kane…?

For five years, Celia was nothing more than Alpha king’s secret lover, wearing her disliked dress and perfume, just because he like it on her. —until She overheard the truth: “She’s just a replacement. A gold digger.” "I chose her, just becuase she seems like you. She's your Substitute. Never deserved be a luna." Shattered, she walks away, vowing never to look back. But then—her instincts sharpen, her senses heighten, and Soren’s scent clings to her skin. ...Mate. Impossible. A wolfless girl like her could never be the Alpha King’s fated mate… right? * On the first day she left, he wasn’t worried. “She’ll come back.” “Don’t bother with it. She was just a substitute lover. A worthless gold digger.” But after a week… a month… three months… his panic set in. “Lock down the entire pack—find her at all costs… —Find my Luna!”

You find out the billionaire’s daughter might be the baby stolen from you years ago, and now she won’t accept anyone but you. He drags you to his mansion and throws a document at you. You’re thinking, “Please, just let me explain… wait, a mate contract?!”

Fiona finds her husband cheating on her for yrs with his secretary. Heartbroken, she's wasted alone in bar. Her husband keeps calling her. His billionaire boss:"Pick it up. Let him hear your moan. Tell him he's fired and you're mine..."

Cara found out she's pregnant after her fate mate proposed to someone else, and today is the day her alpha king ex-mate's wedding... Everyone is waiting for his wedding vows. But he annouces the wedding is cancelled... Bc his man says:"Sir, your ex-mate had a car accident here... she's pregnant with twins……"

Olivia is the daughter of Alpha.She tried everything to have a child with her Beta mate, but he betrayed her and mocked her infertility. Devastated, she got drunk and spent the night with a hot stranger at a bar. Later, she discovered she was pregnant—and that stranger was the most powerful Alpha in the city.

After eight years trapped in a cruel Catholic orphanage, Anna never expected her freedom to come at the hands of dangerous Mafia men. The father of the family that adopted her is a ruthless Mafia lord. In his world, kindness has a price, and nothing is done without reason. And his two sons are both deadly attractive. Leandro is very good at making Anna forget where she is. He treats her like she belongs, but his affection hides secrets just as dangerous as his father’s world. Giovanni is the opposite--cold, disciplined, and bound by duty just like his father. Yet behind his sharp words and quiet glances, the tension between him and Anna sparks into something neither of them can deny. Caught between the two brothers, Anna's hidden desire begins to surface. In a house built on lies and power, love might be the most dangerous game of all.

Le compagnon prédestiné de Judy l'a rejetée et a épousé la fille de Gavin, le président des loups-garous. Comme si cela ne suffisait pas, il détruit également sa famille et tente de faire d'elle sa maîtresse secrète ! La réponse de Judy ? « Je préférerais coucher avec ton beau-père plutôt que d'être avec toi ! » Gavin est connu pour son pouvoir, sa richesse et ses habitudes de play-boy, et il ne couche jamais deux fois avec la même femme. Mais Judy est sur le point de briser toutes ses règles... encore et encore.

Le jour d'Union, Avery a surpris son petit ami Ryan en train de la tromper avec Zara, sa demi-sœur, sous ses yeux, alors que c'était le jour où Ryan devait la choisir comme compagne choisie. Le plus cruel dans cette histoire, c'est que Ryan et Zara étaient dans leur droit, car ils venaient de découvrir qu'ils étaient des compagnons destinés. Avec le cœur brisé, Avery s'est enfuie dans la forêt, pour tomber dans les bras d'un mystérieux inconnu dont l'odeur a déclenché ses chaleurs. Persuadée qu'il s'agissait d'un loup solitaire, elle ne désirait qu'une nuit de passion interdite dans l'obscurité, avec l'intention de s'éclipser à l'aube sans même avoir vu son visage. Pourtant, une fois rentrée chez elle, elle a été prise de panique en découvrant que cet étranger l'avait marquée... Son père l'a menacée de mort si elle ne trouvait pas un mari prêt à l'accepter malgré tout. Au moment où Avery pensait que personne ne voudrait de fille déjà marquée comme elle, Alpha Gideon l'a choisie comme future femme, et quelque chose chez lui semblait étrangement familier...