How To Critique A Short Story の小説・ストーリー

pampakalma. "Duh? Journalism Student 'to." "I am too. Pero hindi naman ganyan kataba utak ko. Anyway, I love the idea but it would be too long for a short story." Napanguso ako. Ano bang short story ang dapat? "Okay. Ikaw naman magsabi ng idea mo." This time nagawa niya na akong tignan. "We'll use an animal to be our characters. Ganoon naman ang short story diba? Animals ang characters.

"Anong verdict mo?" "Iyong totoo? Sabaw. Callie, bakit puro anuhan lang ‘tong story na ‘to? If your making a story lagyan mo ng depth. Although first chapter palang ‘to pero parang walang kapupuntahan kundi, ahhh! ahhh! ohhh! ohhh! ugghhh! Mind you, love making is not all about making noises."