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Running away from the dark past of her life, Sofia McCommer is determined to start new and prove her worth to her family by joining her family business that's close to bankruptcy. Scorched by life, Adrian T Larsen, the powerful business magnet has become a man no one wanted to cross paths with. With only darkness filled in his dead heart, he doesn't know what kindness is, and has an intense hatred for the word: love. And then comes the game. A game of ignoring the cold-hearted playboy Sofia plays with her friends at a Saturday night club. The rules were simple: Ignore the billionaire, hurt his ego and get out. But little did she know that getting out of the paws of an injured tiger wasn't an easy thing to do. Especially when the infamous businessman, Adrian Larsen's male ego was at stake here. Bound by fate when their paths clash with each other more than Sofia ever expected, when the powerful billionaire barges into her life, sparks and desire start to test her resistance. But she has to push him away and keep her heart locked to keep both of them safe from the dangerous shadows of her past. The dark past that always lurked around. But can she do that when the devil has already set his eyes on her? She has played a game, and now she has to face the consequences. Because when a predator is teased, it's supposed to chase...

Ruby married her fate mate, Lucas, only to endure his repeated betrayals with his first love. In the end, she lost everything—her child, her parents, and her hope. But when she’s reborn on the night of her wedding, she vows to rewrite her fate. Determined to protect those she loves, Ruby finds her former enemy, Caleb, Lucas’s brother—the man who will one day kill Lucas and become the Lycan King. Caleb had never shown up at her wedding before, but this time, Ruby looks into his eyes and says, "I want you to be my husband." Can Ruby take control of her future, or will the past haunt her forever?

Mira is a wolf doctor who is about to get married. But she finds out her Beta fiancé has betrayed her for power by secretly being involved with Tessa, the strong Alpha’s daughter. Tessa uses her power to make Mira lose her job and plans to send her to a dangerous medical team on the frontier. Mira unexpectedly saves Dominic, a wounded Alpha. Dominic is the strongest Alpha of the younger generation and Tessa’s feared stepbrother. Dominic needs a Luna to inherit the Alpha position, and now he seems to have found the right person.

"เด็กคนนี้คือใครคะเออเนส ทำไมมาหาคุณถึงที่นี่ได้ ปกติคุณไม่เคยพาใครมานอกจากมินนี่นิคะ" "แค่เด็กในบ้าน เขาเอาขนมมาให้" "ขนมหน้าตาประหลาดจัง คุณชอบทานเหรอ" "เคยชอบนะ แต่ตอนนี้ไม่ชอบแล้ว" ปฏิญญา : เด็กสาวหน้าใส มองโลกทั้งใบเป็นสีชมพู ด้วยความอ่อนต่อโลกและด้อยประสบการณ์ จึงรู้ไม่เท่าทันคนเจ้าชู้เงียบอย่างเขา เออเนส : หนุ่มหล่อเนี๊ยบ เจ้าชู้เงียบและเย็นชา ปากดี ขี้เหงา เอาแต่ใจ คือนิยามในความเป็นเขา เขาทำทุกอย่างเพื่อให้ได้สิ่งที่ต้องการ ถ้าเบื่อแล้วก็เขี่ยทิ้งเหมือนเป็นสิ่งที่ไร้ค่า เมื่อหนุ่มสาวที่นิสัยต่างกันสุดขั้วมาเจอกัน มันจะเกิดอะไรขึ้นหนอ ** เรื่องนี้เป็นเรื่องคู่น้อง ของเรื่อง Malalin of love ร้อยรักมาลารินทร์ (เซดริก-มาลารินทร์) คู่พิเศษ เซนส์- น้ำฟ้า เซนส์: พ่อกับแม่จากไปด้วยอุบัติเหตุตอนเขายังเด็ก โชคดีที่เจ้านายของพ่อรับเขาเป็นลูกบุญธรรม จนมีอนาคตและมีการศึกษา น้ำฟ้า: เธอย้ายตามแม่ที่แต่งงานใหม่มาฝรั่งเศส จนได้พบรักแรกและรักสุดท้ายที่นี่

A huge explosion brought Aaron to the fate of his love life. He doesn’t remember his past and yet, he was greeted by a new ‘family’ when he woke up. A house fills with eight doctors and the love story bloom between them. Bit by bit, Aaron starts to remember his past when he already in love with Hazel. While Hazel is still in trauma because of her past experience, she closed her heart tightly for years.Will their love succeed to bloom? Will Aaron stay with Hazel or pursue back his old love?This is a continuation from 10 Billion To Get A Wife!

Je vis au fond de moi-même. Je ne suis plus qu’une infirme partie de l’être que Dieu a créé au départ. J’ai réussi dans la vie, j’ai cette villa qui ressemble plus à un palais. J’ai des enfants adorables, je suis respecté, honoré et même vénéré par mes employés. Dans cette capitale politique et administre de la côte d’Ivoire qu’est Yamoussoukro, on ne parle que de Leila KONAKRE, la grande femme d’affaire. Celle-là qui a les plus grandes entreprises non seulement de la ville mais de tout le pays. La femme orgueilleuse, arrogante, méchante, influente, oui ! Je suis devenu cette femme que tout le monde craint. Ils m’ont déjà jugé et condamné mais ne peuvent se passer de moi. La question e savoir ce qui a rendu une jeune fille pleine de vie, vivant dans une belle famille harmonieuse, avec des personnes merveilleuses, cette question ne m’a été posée que par une personne.

Holly has been exiled from her pack for harboring a secret crush on her stepbrother, Alex. But she returns to attend Alex's engagement ceremony, determined to prove she's moved on. However, her plans go awry when she accidentally kisses Alex's best friend, Nicholas, whom she can't stand. As fate would twist further, Nicholas turns out to be her future professor... With her upcoming shift and the possibility of finding her fated mate, Holly's life becomes intricately tangled with the two men. Will she find true love, or will her past and present desires lead her down a path of complicated entanglements?

Si Claire Sanchez ay mag-aapply bilang sekretarya ni Zekiel Gray sa dalawang dahilan. Una ay gusto niyang mabawi ang kumpanya nang kaniyang yumaong ina at pangalawa ay upang makita ang isa sa kambal niyang anak. Wala siyang nagawa noon kungdi ang iwan ang panganay na lalaki sa tapat nang gate ni Zekiel dahil sa hirap na palakihin ang kambal at dahil nga kamukang kamuka ito nang lalaki pwera sa mata na nakuha sa kaniya ay pinalaki at kinupkop ito ni Zekiel.Ang kambal ay bunga nang isang gabing hindi nila parehong inakala, One-night stand. Ano kaya ang mangyayari kapag nalaman ni Zekiel na ang kaniya palang sekretarya ay ang babaeng matagal na niyang hinahanap lalo na at sigurado niya na ang ina nang anak niyang lalaki na si Zayn ay ang babaeng nakasama niya limang taon na ang nakakalipas.

Les femmes de ma vie Prologue Né d’un homme sans aucune dignité, sans aucun scrupule, nous avons dû nous enfuir aux aurores d’un beau jour. Je m’en souviens encore. Je n’étais qu’un gamin à cette époque. Avoir de quoi manger pour ma mère était ma seule finalité. voir son sourire était pour moi une bénédiction. Entre vaguer à diverses occupations, je me suis un jour trouver devant cette femme. Cette jeune fille aux yeux luisant, à la peau d’ébène, au sourire envoûteur. Derrière le visage d’ange de ma bien aimé, derrière cette vie de luxe qu’elle vivait, était cachée une jeune femme qui souffrait le martyre. Vendu aux hommes riches et puissant, vendu aux plus offrant, je l’ai rencontré lorsqu’elle n’avait plus espoir. Ibrahim est mon prénom. Je n’ai connu que trois femmes depuis ma naissance. Ces femmes pour lesquelles j’ai dû me battre à en risquer ma vie. Je n’avais connu que la misère depuis ma naissance, cette misère contre laquelle j’ai dû me battre à en risquer ma vie. A tout ceux qui se disent que c’est la fin, sachez qu’on ne peut voir la lumière qu’en persévérant jusqu’au bout du tunnel.

Ryder is a nineteen year old dragon / lycan hybrid. He is the first and only of his kind. His power is a result of the moon goddess and the dragon God directly interfering with a past war. Excluding the moon Goddess, Selene and the dragon God, Typhon, the other Gods fear that Ryder could grow to surpass even their power. Selene and Typhon order Demi, who is a keres to watch over Ryder. The two of them fall in love. The Gods are pushing for Ryder's execution. Circumstances will force Zeus to bind Ryder's power eventually leading to his death. Ryder is reborn and angrier than ever, especially when he finds out that Demi is dealing with problems of her own in Olympus. The book ends with Ryder and the Gods battling. Ryder proves that he is Good and is no threat to any Gods who have pure intentions, but he will do what he must to ensure that no God abuses their power. Ryder ends up becoming a God himself.