Story Critique Example Novels & Stories

They meet in a quiet moments at dawn, a love so deep yet so painfully wrong. But the vows they took, the rings they wear are chains of promise they both must bear. Yet in the silence, their hearts still scream for the life together that can only be a dream. This is the story of Chris and Shey, their love that is left behind.

Anastacia Bonnette Corpuz a strong woman with a big dreams. But would she be able to be strong despite of what she's going through? would she be able to aim her goal despite of what she is going through? Witness the story of Anastacia, here on 'THE GOALS: BLUE RIBBON SERIES 1"

Brenda thought her life was perfect, but her love story did not end up the way she wanted to. Her turned into a nightmare when her lover, Pablo, had an affair with a younger woman because she cannot conceive a child.

What if time was running out? but love wasn't? In a world where moments matter. love in the present is a beautiful exploration of love, loss, and living in the 'now'. Dive into the captivating story of Jackie Leigh Villamor and Aireshi Takahashi as they uncovers the true meaning of love and living in the present.

A story between a forgotten star and a ruthless billionaire. Their marriage was contractual, no strings attached, at kailanman ay hindi puwedeng mahulog ang isa hanggang sa matapos ang kontrata. Sa likod nang pagarte nila bilang magasawa, may mabubuo nga bang kakaiba sa pagitan nilang dalawa?

In the depths of darkness, there will always be a ray of light telling you that it's still not your end but a stepping stone to a better life. The way how Tayja Prish perceives her fate, it was the opposite of Taira Jaz. It takes one body with two different stories. As their end ends their story, will they ever become one?

Bumalik ako para mahalin ka,lahat kaya kong gawin para mahalin mo rin ako. Nararamdaman kong nagpapakipot ka lang,dahil sa nagawa kong pag-alis na walang paalam sayo.Pero nararamdaman kong mahal mo rin ako-Claire Montage Sebastian (Claire and Macky story) (Book 4)

WARNING ‼️ SPG ALERT! May content violence and abusing and more k*lling! If you are 18 years old below don’t read this, please hindi po ito pambata. And if you are old enough, please be responsible.And don’t copy my story maging patas tayo! Plagiarism is a crime! - “ The secret of changes is to focus all your energy, not on fighting the old, but not building the new.” - Ava Olivia Lleva Mikhail Levesque. A.K.A Ciara Savannah Corpuz. ~ Due to the death of Ciara or Ava's parents, she was able to pretend or have two personalities. To find the real culprit in the death of her parents. - Hayah! I’m back again! Sana po magustuhan niyo po si Ciara o Ava.This is an another Maf

Cindy's cousin run away on her wedding day with a handsome but crippled CEO of the Aldana Group. Because of it, she was forced by her uncle to replace her cousin to be Adam's bride. Adam has a short-tempered attitude because of his illness while Cindy has a free-spirited personality despite all of her problems. These two people with opposite attitudes and personalities live together in one house which makes the cold and huge house of Adam to be livelier. Cindy couldn't help but falls in love with Adam even though she knows that she is just a substitute bride. But Cindy's cousin, Lucy, suddenly went back and wants to reclaim what is supposed to be her. Lucy's appearance makes a lot of misund

A dark romance story. Please refrain on reading if you don't like reading stories with dark themes. **** Tahimik na gumagawa ng proyekto nila sa kanilang eskwelahan si Jane at ang kaniyang mga kasama noong bigla siyang may narinig na sigawan. Dahil sa kuryusidad ay napasilip siya sa bintana at doon nakita niya ang isang lalaki na pinatay ng mga hindi kilalang kalalakihan. Noong sumunod na araw ay nakilala niya si Rodrigo Navarro. Ang pinaka makapangyarihang tao sa kanilang lugar. Ang taong magpapabago ng tahimihik niyang buhay. Hanggang kailan kaya niya maitatago ang pag-aari ng binata kung maging siya ay inaangkin na nito? Trigger warning! This story consists of mature scenes un