Story Critique Example Novels & Stories

Brenda thought her life was perfect, but her love story did not end up the way she wanted to. Her turned into a nightmare when her lover, Pablo, had an affair with a younger woman because she cannot conceive a child.

They meet in a quiet moments at dawn, a love so deep yet so painfully wrong. But the vows they took, the rings they wear are chains of promise they both must bear. Yet in the silence, their hearts still scream for the life together that can only be a dream. This is the story of Chris and Shey, their love that is left behind.

Anastacia Bonnette Corpuz a strong woman with a big dreams. But would she be able to be strong despite of what she's going through? would she be able to aim her goal despite of what she is going through? Witness the story of Anastacia, here on 'THE GOALS: BLUE RIBBON SERIES 1"

What if time was running out? but love wasn't? In a world where moments matter. love in the present is a beautiful exploration of love, loss, and living in the 'now'. Dive into the captivating story of Jackie Leigh Villamor and Aireshi Takahashi as they uncovers the true meaning of love and living in the present.

WARNING ‼️ SPG ALERT! May content violence and abusing and more k*lling! If you are 18 years old below don’t read this, please hindi po ito pambata. And if you are old enough, please be responsible.And don’t copy my story maging patas tayo! Plagiarism is a crime! - “ The secret of changes is to focus all your energy, not on fighting the old, but not building the new.” - Ava Olivia Lleva Mikhail Levesque. A.K.A Ciara Savannah Corpuz. ~ Due to the death of Ciara or Ava's parents, she was able to pretend or have two personalities. To find the real culprit in the death of her parents. - Hayah! I’m back again! Sana po magustuhan niyo po si Ciara o Ava.This is an another Maf

Bumalik ako para mahalin ka,lahat kaya kong gawin para mahalin mo rin ako. Nararamdaman kong nagpapakipot ka lang,dahil sa nagawa kong pag-alis na walang paalam sayo.Pero nararamdaman kong mahal mo rin ako-Claire Montage Sebastian (Claire and Macky story) (Book 4)

A story between a forgotten star and a ruthless billionaire. Their marriage was contractual, no strings attached, at kailanman ay hindi puwedeng mahulog ang isa hanggang sa matapos ang kontrata. Sa likod nang pagarte nila bilang magasawa, may mabubuo nga bang kakaiba sa pagitan nilang dalawa?

In the depths of darkness, there will always be a ray of light telling you that it's still not your end but a stepping stone to a better life. The way how Tayja Prish perceives her fate, it was the opposite of Taira Jaz. It takes one body with two different stories. As their end ends their story, will they ever become one?

A picture-perfect family will be ruined after Amanda (wife) discovered that her husband (David) is cheating on her. She then finds comfort from her neighbor named Eden. Little did she know is that Eden also keeps a dark secret about Amanda's past. This is a story of lust, revenge, grief, and betrayal.

The story is about the Innocent but deadly girl named Aurora. She's prohibited to look at the mirror. She's a simple and innocent girl that's why a lot of students are bullying her. One day, she accidentally looked at her own reflection in a front of a mirror. After that incident, she become deadly.